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Vered 1/26/05 . chapter 8
Nice... But as you said, it's a bit incomplete.
Vered 1/26/05 . chapter 4
Mia and Isaac seem a little...close, for people who've just met. Your story's quite interesting, though.
Vered 1/26/05 . chapter 3
Well, Mia's reaction to seeing Isaac murder someone was pretty mild, and she seems to have forgotten it all. Still, other than that, it's pretty good.
DarkFeenix 7/17/04 . chapter 8
your story went gradually from weird to insane... and has probably more untied ends than all the other fics I have read together... But, I still liked it :) I like mudshipping(or whatever you want to call it) and I like stories about legends and myths(like angels and demons :P) Aside from the totally insane plot and weird character developement it's great, I think I'll check rest of your stories tomorrow
DarkFeenix 7/17/04 . chapter 3
some weird stuff in this chap, for example Mia sees Isaac commit murder right in front of her eyes and next thing she asks is to come to his house O_O I really don't see that happening...

Haven't really read thease school fics before(mainly because most of 'em are very, let's say inferior quality :P), but this one has been good so far :)
SamuraiKnight 7/10/04 . chapter 6
Me like this story!

Mist: I like it too!
Alayea 5/31/04 . chapter 8
A second epilogue, hm? *lol* Well, I wouldn't have noticed the update if I hadn't to visit this category. (I rarely visit it anymore since there are _very_ few fanfics worth reading now. :b)

{_} Anyway, the chapter was great! Keep up the good work!

* Alayea *
Princess Viv 5/24/04 . chapter 8
I love this story. Well done!
Lokhart 5/17/04 . chapter 8
Damn.
So complicated, so many questions...
and few answers.
But it was great. Although the ending left me wanting a bit more, I was satisfied with it.
Lokhart 5/17/04 . chapter 5
wow. It IS confusing. But I'm still reading, since it is really good. -
Lokhart 5/17/04 . chapter 3
Wow, I usually sign at the latest chapter, but I'll make an exception in ur case. It's just that this chapter strongly reminded me of MARS. Do you read that, or what? lol. Especially when Mia was like, U make me feel safe and stuff. 0.o. Lol
Akiko 5/16/04 . chapter 8
Holy crap! I was thinking about this story just the other day! _
Anywho, I'm glad you finally put up an epilogue. Though we still don't know who won that race for home...I vote Mia, but still...
This was good! Always knew Kraden was a pervert. Thank you for putting it up!
Death Scythe X-9 5/6/04 . chapter 3
Awsome story.
Edwin 10/24/03 . chapter 7
The story was great! I really look forward to reading another one of your stories!
ShadowSnake27 10/7/03 . chapter 7
Awesome I like it! I didnt understand it at first. I hope you make a sequil!

SEE YA LATER!

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