Cool story, different way for Bella and Edward meet in the 80's! Don't know if you truly captured the era, but its cute!

Wow.. I really liked it! it would be awesome if u would continue it afterwards.. über nice story, really!

LOVE IT!

Good job!

Loved it so, so MUCH!

Please continue this story after the competition is over - I want to see what happens to my favourite couple and I also want to see Jakes magazine fail!

Oh my gosh!

I NEVER review or anything - just read - but you have made me create an accoutn just so I can review this for you!

I loved everything about this story. Firstly - it fit the song perfectly - the lyrics were spelt out right there in what you wrote. I would have guessed the song even if you hadn't told us at the beginning.

She was pure like snowflakes

no one could ever stain

The memory of my angel

Could never cause me pain

Year go by I'm looking through a girly magazine

And there's my homeroom angel on the pages inbetween

My blood runs cold

My memory has just been sold

My angel is the centrefold

Angel is the centrefold

Amazing, completely amazing. And as for Jake and James - urgh! So glad that Edward punched him. I loved the bit where he split the bag of peas that was numbing his hand.

Also loved that he was sensible to use protection - so key to the time when there was so much fear about AIDS.

You have my vote and I seriously hope you win - I'm gonna let everyone know about this gem of a story. I am also looking forward to finding out who you are so I can read all your other stories (hopefully there are loads - but if not then I will add you to my author alerts in the hope of future stories.)

Good luck with everything

XXXXX

I liked this story. Very dark and seedy, so 80's! Huge surprise about Bella's previous life but definitely made sense in the story. Nice one shot.

Can I buy a vowel - cos I'm speechless. Omg! I loved it! Haha. This was great, I love the entire storyline of it, it had a total Hugh Hefner feel to it.. but BEFORE he had all the centerfold girlfriends! I love that Bella just disappeared & then reappeared 7yrs later as a centerfold model. Great read! Loved it.

Oh, this was brilliant. I absolutely adored every, single word!

Angel WAS a centrefold...now she's the center of his universe. Lovely!

So glad they found each other!

And I hope Jake's magazine fails...!

Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!

Kathie

great story. i loved it!

Great story! I usually dont review, but i wanted you to know that you did a great job :)

That was hot.