Wow. I mean. That was. I'm. That left me speechless.

*pauses to catch breath*

I can still feel the shivers your story is sending up and down my spine. Your imagery is amazing. Your descriptions are so vivid. I can literally see everything as its happening.

My favorite line has to be "She couldn't help the shudder of rage that passed through her as she watched that-that spider unfurl himself and rise to his full height, his dark eyes glittering with mirth." That was always how I imagined Travers. You put it into words. You capture him beautifully.

That was amazingly creepy, the last paragraph sent shivers down my spine. Poor Marlene. I love it.

A piece which depicted a horrible, horrible event in such a way that it seemed real - very well written... :)