Good job again. Few spelling mistakes this time but nothing too bad. So Integra didn't expect this litle problem to come up ehheheh like she said she should have quessed it. Well I am glad that Queen set her straight on matters. Thou I can understand why she would feel quilty and hope what she did. Either way good scene with dance floor Lagoon company with family and friends really shocked the place.

For later parts nice job with Talia's lets just say action, good job with both. But seriously that Elza is one weird bitch even by black lagoon standard and I got a feeling that we will see her again. Heck of an escape plan with her thou didn't see that one coming. Thou now I wonder if Rooker was right and that this attempt was only begin. I mean Elza was targeting the Queen but was the true idea mission to scare some1 as idea of their leader who knows. Either way nice job there with homecoming as well. Looks like they got litle rest at least for now and litle explaining to do.

As for child's name I will quess that they will name it by one the child grandparents. This means for boy either Pip, Walter(I seem to remember that this was Rooker's biological fathers name) or Rokuro. As for girl Rebecca, Seras or Vladilena(not sure if Balalaika would like this thou, but who knows). Thou it's possible that they could name the boy by Dutch but not sure. I have reason why I think they could chose any of them put me private message if you want to know.

Anyway overall good job and I hope that you update soon.

well man im not going to lie u had me scared there i stumble pun this lil diamond 2 weeks ago (roughly) and i loved each and every chapter i was beginning to give up that ud post more till i dragged my sorry ass back onto the site to check one last time, :) and u didnt fail to show i love the book so far and as a fan of both Hellsing and Black Lagoon u do both shows justice, keep up the good work and im excitingly waiting the next installment of this treasure.

Yours a fan from the great beyond

Great job again once again Roanapur group shocks the world ehhehe now we only need Balalaika to appear with Victor and then things get really ugly if some1 tries to make a move on Kelti ehhehehe.

Either way nice scene's with preparing for ball. Seriously I would have loved to see Revy and Sheila in those dresses I'd say Rock had good reason to looks shocking. Seriously thou I'd really love to see Integra meeting Balalaika seriously there would be new world's scariest women meeting heheheheh. Well at least Alucard is on Rooker's side when it comes to dress code.

As for ball looks like Queen got her entertainment. Paice was in for real shock heheheheh. Quess he still remembers Rooker hehheheh. Thou I can understand that poor man got scared when he heard all people that entered.

As for later fight good to see that Revy is still herself hehe. Idiot's made so big mistake and looks like Alucard won't have to skin them since Rock took care of that :D. But seriously those punks need education and much. Nobleman can't hit lady like that ever it's serious breach of etiquette, but looks like they learned their lesson. Thou I gotta admit that daddy coming to defend his litle girls honor is bit classic in this case it just seems so wrong and in a good way thou :D. Seriously wonder what all will say in Roanapur once they hear of that.

And party just started only can't help but wonder just how much more will happen. But gotta ask Integra didn't say anything about Rooker and Sheila's engagement yet right? Wonder what kinda shock that will bring :D.

Overall really greatly done chapter and I hope that you update soon.

Beatifull chapter truly. I really loved reading this. So Integra's punishment is to take the whole damm family and friends to high class ball. Oh shit you right god help us this is gonna be bad and I mean really bad. Lets just hope that Rock can keep things at peace. For if he fails god have mercy on those poor nobles and their lusty ways. I almost feel pity about them, the keyword being almost :D.

So Rock and Revy met in-laws more now and oh boy Integra really freaked every1 out I can only wonder what all Alucard will say once he meets all. Hans was freaked out nicely and same for Talia phew that was almost scary as it was funny. I can already image Revy, Integra and Balalaika someday at same god or devil I don't care who but save the day that day.

The fight part was rather good and so was the aftermath. Well I gotta that was one hell of a way to deliver wedding invitations heheheh wonder what Integra will do to Victor once she meets him. Nephew-in-law candidate is in for bad fight I wager ehheheh.

For nephew and aunt meeting good job there of course Integra would worry about her carpet classic afterall. So Rooker is in for a fight as well and by this I mean the ball ehheheh. Just hope all can behave thou given Rookers comment of nobles things might get bloody there for soon.

Overall really good chapter this time and I hope that you update soon. I am waiting eagerly to see what happens at the ball and once family meets Alucard also. Btw since wedding came up I take it that Balalaika, Victor and several otehr Roanapur people might be coming also.

Good chapter again and so literally all hell has broken lose Balalaika gotta be proud of her son now. And he is doing all this as her oh boy shit's gonna fly BIG TIME NOW. Looks like I was right the escape is gonna happen Roanapur style. So Eda didn't know all thou she could have quessed if I understood correctly.

For Jason seems like he will need to have some words with his old friend and I don't think they will be pretty. And looking by the last piece I'd say that even Rooker is in for a big fight now we only need his adoptive aunt Integra to join in and if hell ain't lose by now it sure is then.

Overall good chapter again and I hope that you update soon.

Nice chapter again. So Rooker maybe will be having a lot of trouble with Sheila's mood swings heheheh yeah I can already image how she will do it and when she gets her hands on gun's. I suddenly feel very sorry for Rooker when Sheila's mood swings start. As for who Kelti refered as mysterious she I am quessing that it is her aunt Integra. Did I quess that right? Embassy and power would point to her.

For trial good job there, Kelti really is nice lawyer. For Revy's story oh boy, I mean I knew there was a story behind it but damm don't even know what to say about it. Now I just wonder who payed that prosecutor a lot of money can't image that corrupted cop to have enough. As for where Hans and Talia are I am quessing they are preparing for trouble.

Overall nice chapter again and I hope that you update soon. As for Rock's rap sheet nice job I really admit I have no idea how he managed to make Revy,Balalaika and Chang to do what they did. Well man has always being a mystery.

Nice chapter again. So finaly Rock and Revy are seen. Revy's talk to Sheila was rather nice mother-daughter talk. Thou I feel sorry for that poor phone hehehehehe. I seriously wonder what will ROck do once Revy tells him the news he will probably tkae it better than Revy but you never know Rock is really protective of his close ones and could be really protective father.

For later part seriously Balalaika really scare's me still. I seriously wonder what the rest of the gang will do if they learn all what she said, poor Victor don't know what to think now. Kelti would probably be glad to have kids thou. Later scene with Kelti heheheheh that was true classic once again.

For that plan B if I have to quess it would be get out here Roanapur style. Means lot of guns and bullets but then again could more subtle can't say for sure. For Revy's background wondered but what all made her to keep the child now I know thou should ahve known it to be along those lines. For how Revy Rock and Revy will react to new Lagoon I honestly don't know. They could like them or not. This for fact they know no1 from the new members savee Talia.

Overall good job with this one hope that you update soon.

Nice chapter again really enjoyed of this one. The first part with Sheila planning to tell fails because of friends just classic :D. At least Rookers plan to hook up Talia and Hans worked out. I can only image Victor's look when he found out that he is gonna be uncle, I now wiat with eagerness of how will Rock,Revy and Balalaika react. Sheila was in for a shock as well and well pretty much every1 must have been to learn about every1 thing. Thou if some1 tell Balalaika I think it would be best if it was Sheila. Talks between future daughter and mother in law should be fun.

The later scene was also fun with frying pan hehehehhehe. And ofcourse that jsut had to get better for Rooker to find out about Victor and Kelti that one was the true classic hehehehe and ofcourse how Kelti saved the situation was great. So Rooker finaly proposed also Revy and Rock are really gonna be in shock one they learn of everything that has happened, thou Revy might be glad that she will be related to Balalaika. For Rap sheet they have been good. They give litle bakcground info/clearence of characters.

Anyway good job on this and I hope you update soon.

Nice chapter again. For first part I am not so suprised that Rooker didn't go ballistic he quite a lot like Balalaika in calm personality and probably doesn't show shock easily thou after what Sheila tells him well that might make things intresting. Well at least we now know bit's of history namely Balalaika's. I quess Rooker also has to visit his father's grave soon. For Victor's reaction thou I quess he might be bit shocked but not for long. Meeting with him,Kelti and Rooker for enxt time thou might be litle weird and awkward.

Thou quess I should say for this chapter like parents like children Rooker resemblens Balalaika to some degree and Talia is much like her mother. For Rooker matchmaking it seems things at least get good start even thou they lied about bike. For Roland there it has to be the one from the past thou when Rooker and he finaly meet F5 tornado is gonna look like a picnic.

Either way good chapter and I hope you update soon. Rookers reaction to Sheila's news should be fun and I wonder how Sheila will react to Rookers news of Balalaika.

Really great chapter really nice. The first part was quite good I wonder if Rooker was right of his tought why Balalaika chose Vicotr for this.

For our lovely girl's nicely done. Kelti as usual is quite odd and cute thou I wonder how Victor will react to her questions thou I can quess he could say why not this can't anymore wierder than it already is. I think Rooker might like the idea but I wonder his reaction will be with everything else. Asta was rather cute here also so was Talia thou they were right best that Rooker never see that video or Victor for that matter might be really bad. So Hans goes to Lagoon as well I wonder how Rookers plan to mix him up with Talia will go could succeed. And lastly so finaly Rooker knows his mother why do I get feeling there's F5 level tornado coming there oh boy.

For how most people will react I don't think Victor will freak out much about Celti he doesn't ahve much reason they don't have any blood link after Kelti is his half-brothers foster sister after all. Thou I do think he might freak a bit for Rooker being his brother. For Sheila I think she will just tell Rooker straight that would probably be best. For Sheila worrying about Revy yeah that might be right she could bust out of jail with Rock just for that. But she should also worry about Balalaika thou she doesn't know it yet true. But what Balalaika do once she finds out she is gonna be grandma also. And now that I think of Revy and Balalaika being grandma's of same baby ... god help us all.

Anyway I hope you update soon, you really left nice cliffhanger.

Well its an OK chap...

But I'm sure IF Sheila's parents got the wind of what she is doing ...IF they are true parents then in a realistic sense they will do everything in their power to get her out of it...or are you going to keep them locked away forever...?

Balalaika in all sense is doing crime business thus will not get any support from the military in Russia...well except her own rag tag squad...that's reality.

Anyway good chap here hope to see more about rock and revy.

Good to see you back nice chapter in total. So island is getting to be paradise on earth ehhheheheh. Sheila will make fortune with that video if she decide's to sell that. Thou her food what she was eating is that jsut her habbit or pregnancy thing?

For prison break good fight in. With realistic plot sacrafice few to get more out probably only way to get out. So Balalaika was planning something bigger all along should have known, that woman is dangerously cunning. For note in earlier chapters I wodner what Vicot and Rooker's reaction will be once they find out that their cover story wan't some much a fake as one would think. And for the last bit nice litle cliffhanger. Why do I get feeling we are gonna meet Roland in the end. Or did I misundestand and he died already?

Anyway I hope you update soon.

Nice chapter truly, battle was itself was well written. Was also good good to know how things happened and how things led to happenings in Roanapur. You managed to make battle quite realistic and it was nice to read can't if I like some part more than other. Thou I have few questions. Is Kelti british nobility as niece of knight she would be right? Secondly is Balalaika Rooker's mother? That sure would explain much, her reaction and why she visited yankee's grave earlier among them. And if I am right does even Rooker know yet? More like it would be fun for him and Victor to find out that they are half-brother.

Even if this is true atleast Kelti and Victor ain't blood related thou you could consider them family in some sense. Even so relationship storm in Roanapur sure is gonna take nice turn hehehehe.

Hope you update soon.

Dude ...Too many OC's( (I've lost count...and why does everyone have a military background...did their parent groomed them to be a killer?)

When the hell is Rock and Revy going to make their appearance...?

Did ya know that Eda the Nun is actually undercover CIA agent...so why stay at Roanapur?

too many characters have mil background and why does everyone meet exactly at Roanapur?...Its like their parent wanted their kids to be like them...How can Balalikas son be VDV...I thought Balalaika is kicked out from the military?

Nice chapter again with great twist. So all are in place and things are ready to BOOM. But Rooker or others will probably curse the day, why can't anything ever go simply as planned. I got in my mind idea that those Taydr will be there for reason, and most likely Pip and Bernadottes killer is there. Comfortation between him/her and Rooker will most likely make hell look like a picnic.

And another twist so Sheila is most likely pregnant, well Rooker gets nice bomb on his lap when he returns. And just like her to find way to make fun of it, she could easily blackmail others for material she will get there. Pornshop probably would pay fortune for what happens in that island. And for the record if some1 got lost to that isalnd he would probably get killed, but who cares got to see heaven before it all happened :D.

Hope you update soon.