I know I wouldn't mind reading more of this, the pairing fits and the writing is amazing! Hoping you will post chapter 2!

No offence, I'm telling you how it is, Alice Longbottom or Prewitt I think she once was... is a funny, warm-hearted girl who loves a good laugh and i can't see this happening, her and Lily are friends period - I think james potter is lilys and frank is alices, and I don't think this because JK says so, I think it because I truly believe they belong together, sorry but you told me to review and here it is, over all it was okay and I am going to check out more of your stories now!

Good luck!