AGHAAH! that can't be...Maeve has learnt many of lifes leasons when with sinbad, and would by now KNOW not to kill something if it also meant killing a friend, and i so doubt Sinbad would ever fall for someone that is not her!

but nice work on the whole, i didn't see the end comming and i found it really nice, but also incredable angsty and the same time...poor chick and her non man.

right at the end there i was sitting on the edge of my seat thinking...no...she can't have rally...CRAP SHE DID...and yeah, you do have to write some more of this, this could be a really kick ass plot thing..like she travels into hell to find sinbad and on the way stuff happens to her.

you have great talent as a wqriter, i can see that easily, and i would love to read more of your stuff.

bye bye

i thought it was really well written, but u can't just end it there!

Not bad.

Sorta BtVS-ish. kinda like Becoming pt 2 eerie. definatly a good story though.

Yeesh! That's so cool!...Please write a sequel!