Well, wow!

It was amazing. Really!

So beautifully written, so full of details and Realistic .

I loved it! Totally !

I loved how you have Described emma's mother. She seems to be a strong woman. And also i loved how she was able to Understand the feeling between Emma and jenny; her love for her child; her fear that Emma could be' hurt by discrimination ; the way she acts: she is worried but she knows what is good for emma; the way she speaks with jenny... Her way of telling her not to play with Emma .

It was super.

And i hope you Will write something else !

I Will wait for a new one!

Thanks