all i can say is WOW. like the story. full of every sense of emotions. reminds me of my life and my best friend who happens to be male. been BFF's going on 23 years and although im married he is not and i am his lean too when he is down. although i doubt we will be together beyond friendship, plus im happily married and he is 3 states away, we talk,text,Facebook and at one time we even webcamed. but we are Friends. plus he is my kids God father. great story.

Poignant and painful at times, (yes I cried) your story made the never ending connection between Clark and Chloe blatantly obvious. A really heartfelt and honest tale.

Thought I would give some more of the Chlark a go and the title intrigued me. Fantastic demonstration of a push-pull, Love/Hate relationship and that the Chloe we thought was all put together in the finale was really just BS ing herself (again) until she learnt not to. Ha when your immortal whats 4 decades to learn to be an adult. Kudos also for incorporating the scene with her son in singapore.

I really like this! It's great that we get to see the evolution of Chloe and how she grows into her different relationships. Carl is really cute and I like the alliteration of all of them. That Chloe is immortal too is really great. I'm glad that Clark actually does get a partner forever.

Til later readings