loved your story!

My favorite one-shot... *sigh*

Thank you!

short and sweet, not bad, but great.

finally, a story about a real duck.

write s'more, ok?

its better the way it is noiw, dont change a thing.

That was a nice one-shot fanfic. But in the shootout the ducks had a 1 goal lead, so even if gunner scored they'd tie the game up.

This is a good fic - short and sweet and to the point. You've got the base, but you should really work on your elaboration. It seems like you're doing kind of same-old things. I don't mean to be bitter, but we all know the things you've writen. You should work on characterizing them beyond the point that Disney has settled for. Even if you never return to a fic like this, or re-do anything about it, I'm advising that you work on the descriptions, and original dialoque...Maybe even try something that has nothing to do with the movie. Again - simple opinionated suggestion. Nice job.