Read the start of the next chapter and just saying you may know this but the original whatcha say is

Hide and seek by imogan heap but yeah great song

Great story

And you are right flaming like a charizard is a dickhead because he clearly has never read a newspaPer because if he had he would relize that when any star gets a girlfriend it spreads like wild fire and is the top shit in the world

I like pie

I enjoyed this chapter _

Barry really did lighten the mood! I loved this character! He's like a brother to all of them. Especially Dawn of course for he's closest to her than any of the other girls.

I like how he's there to like pick them up and make sure they're okay with his comforting words. So sweet! And he adds humor to the situation. Double bonus _

I love how Dawn is there for Leaf! True friendship. I wish I could add a heart o.O but oh well. Anyways...I'm glad Dawn didn't freak out and be all like "OMG YOU SLEPT WITH GARY?" and stuff xD you know? Cliche stories would've done that -.- but your story definitely isn't that ;) and Dawn making Leaf go to the doctor despite Leaf "claiming" she's fine. Shows how much she's worried about her :)

I would make my friend do the same thing. You can never be too safe :)

You portray their friendship extrememly well

LOL! Dawn and Leaf made Barry eat glue XD they're so mean - haha. Funny xD

And I can't believe Barry slipped up :o I'm glad the girls didn't really catch on though. And I'm glad Dawn didn't flip on him. She simply hid what he said - you know what I mean, right? XD - and the girls believed it.

Again, some cliche story would've had her flip on him for that. And once again, as well, your story isn't cliche (;

I like how she just told him it was okay and just to be careful what he says around them :) for some reason, I found that cute.

Poor Ash /: I feel bad for him! x.x He lost the love of his life and she won't hear him out :'( and he's truly sorry and he really loves her man!

But I'm not too sad, because I know what happens because you told me (said in sing song voice XD)

1. "This song isn't stupid. You're stupid"

2. "You're an idiot."

3. "Ash, I'm going to say this as nicely as I can...Dawn hates you"

4. "There's not way she thinks you're a better kisser than me."

5. "He looks pretty uncomfortable" *Drew shrugs* "Well, I'm hungry."

XD those 5 lines...entertained me xD. Soo funny how drew just said "Well, I'm hungry" xD he changed the subject so quick as if it was nothing lol.

And gary followed xD and Paul's like whatever.

Ha!

And omg! My favorite line in this chapter: "We're not broken up until I say we're broken up."

For some reason I am so drawn to the line! I felt like Ash got some assertiveness xD. That was just epic! That sentence was badass!

:o coinisidence that the boys ran into Leaf and Dawn at the mall. As I said before, I love their determination it shows that they really do love them. But why can't the girls realize that? /:

However, they're severely hurt so I understand (: besides...I still know the outcome ;) you told me...

KARAOKE! WOOOO! Next chapter should be fun :) I'm hoping the boys appear wherever they go XD I hope so just so I can say "I KNEW IT!" XD

And yeah, bring Reggie back so I can kick his a_s! -_- Seriously. I need a way to blow some of this steam off anyway -.-

Hehe, don't worry :) I won't say a word. Secret is safe with me Always guarantee that!

To conclude my review...this chapter was good, as always of course :), and it couldn't have been better :) Everything was perfect!

I can't wait until you update but in the mean time, I'll be texting you :D

Signed,

your little sister that you have yet to meet in person xD,

Sydney :D

I say she's not! And the girls might be taking them using them for something really hard... It's not like they don't care about them. The girls are taking everything to the extreme.

Have you seen the new review button? I just had to click it, it looks amazing!:o

Anyway, yeah. I'm loving Barry so much now, you would not believe it! It's ridiculous, I'm actually drooling with happiness every chapter he's in...

Jeez, I really need to get out more.

Great chapter; You handled this scene very well, with all the seriousness of the scene and all, Dawn showing a very well best friend behaviour taking her to a doctor even though leaf's going against it, that was very nicely done. I gotta appreciate you on that.

HAHA! I am glad you bring in Barry, he's so funny, LOL! He's actually cheering up the girls :O That's goood! I love the humour through out man, I was actually sad when he was like "just gonna leave" D: I am like ahh! but Haha I am glad he's staying man! :D I love how Misty got angry at him and he's all . and his conversations with May! OMG HILARIOUS! I LOVE HIM :D (Y) You have done an exceptionally well job in maintaining his character dude, you know how I say he always do a goood job in exploring Dawn's character? well, just like that you have done a VERY WELL job in exploring Barry's character :D Really I appreciate it.

Fine, I wouldn't tell anyone...like I would tell anyone -_- I don't even know most people . Haha!

OH! They bumped to Gary and Ash :O Woah,I actually thought they tracked down the girls and came *sweat drops* but then you explained how they actually needed to go in the first place and them meeting the girls there was just a coincident.

Aww, man...I really wish Dawn would just forgive Ash...! Don't know about Gary though...! Buut I really wish Dawn would just listen to him..! :/ any who.

Haha, I love BARRY's HUMOUR! Yay, he's taking the girls out, they needed to go out anyways, after receiving the horrible news :O Hope they don't get face to face with media or anything. :S I am excited :) Update sooon.

You did a wonderful job in explaining each scene, briefing and detailing..! A job well done. Characters well explored, exceptionally good use of humour genre :D I loved it.

Characters well explored, very well done especially on Dawn and Barry. :)

UPDATE SOOOON! :)

Update SOON! Can't wait for the contestshipping next chapter!

I'm guessing Leaf's test is going to come out positive? I hope it does, it might just save oldrivalshipping...

WHERES THE ANSWER WHERE I NEED TO KNOW IF LEAF PREGNANT OR NOT! also its me ELENI! yay you updated!

Great story! I read it in one long sitting last night.

If it's not too much to ask, I'd like to request Breakeven by The Script. I think it perfectly describes the situation currently.

Aawee, this chapter was good :)

I feel bad for the girls, but more for Dawn and Leaf because it seems they're hurt the most /:

I would love to rage at the boys, but obviously I can't because I, as well as every other reader, know how they really feel about the girls and that they didn't mean to hurt the girls.

It's all Reggie's fault man -_-

But anyways, I love Barry in this chapter _ He went typical brother mode XD and I'm glad he was there :) and I was hoping to see him and Gary fight XD I was laughing on the part lol! XD

Also, the explanation why Dawn didn't want to see him was well explained. Barry didn't even cross my mind as a person she didn't want to see.

Even though Misty and Paul aren't dating, she's clearly still hurt by it /: but at least she's not as bad as the other girls.

And poor May /: She let Drew back in after all the things he put her through and this happens (though she doesn't know he reeally likes her)

And oh god! Leaf! She and Gary had "bedroom time ;)" and she finds this out and she thinks he used her /: damn.

And finally...Dawn /: I really understand where she's coming from despite not knowing how Ash really feels, also. She reeaally loved him and then she over hears them talking /: and things went from there. Plluuuss he read her diary. And I looooovveee how she said

"You can read a girl's diary without feeling insecure about what she thinks of you"

Like, for some reason...I rreeeaallly loved that line! Its so true! So aawweesome job with that :)

The boys are determined to get them back and I freaking love that! Shows they do really care about them _

Oh! One more thing! I thought Dawn falling alseep in the park and Paul finding her and taking her back to her house was cute! _ that was so sweet...for him!

All in all...this chapter was awesome! :D and of course I absolutely adored it

I already know it won't be long until you update... ;)

*btw...we're still updating at the same time, right? XD*

haiii! its me eleni i finally made an account. is lemon head still annoying you? i cant pm yet but ill fave you and put your story on alerts!

If you don't mind, could you please include these songs : You Can't Break A Broken Heart - Kate Voegele, and Because Of You - Kelly Clarkson.

They describe the situations that the girls are in, except for Misty. I think that you should only sleep with someone unless you love them...

Leaf really loved Gary... I can understand what she feels like right now. Fell over twice (been heartbroken), and have had no one to pick me up. The girls don't believe how much the guys love them. So sad...

But I really love your fic!

The guys gain the girls' love and trust. The guys fall deeply in love, but at a terrible price!

*cries*

So sad...

Blitz

You know, I've been reading this fic since it was published, But i never reviewed...

SOWWY!

Anyways...

Awesome chapter, as always, and actually i think that making this shorter will emphasize the next chapter, so you best be havin' a good ol' chapter next. Eheh, sorry i fail epicly

Anyways, i love all this aura guardian shit, but i know that you cant really put that into this fic, but i thought of something...

MOVIE TIIIIME!

I mean, it seems like a good time to put one in after (and IF (DUN DUN DUN)) they make up.

And ignore all the people that want lemons and the haters, cuz haters gon' bitch, bitches gon' hate, but most importantly, taters gon' tot. Peace Stupid Bitch! (Joke reffering to slapwaves friends review, incase you didnt get it) Bye! :)

Haha, this wasn't short :p well yea if you compare your long chapters. :p

Anywho, this was so good, make me stress less, since I have exams and all, sometimes my brain needs relax when I am over load stressed or something :s so I ended up reading your chapter :) put me in right mooood :) Thank you!

Oh yea, you know how I told you i'd review at 17 well, I got a big gap from exams now... :p today was one and the last is on 17th so.. yea Gap :D thought I should read and review asap :D

Oh DRAMA! :O

Awwwh man, I hate how Dawn and Ash are fighting :( but it'll be over sooon :) I can't wait to see how you deal with that,,!

I love this chapter too, you always have that element of surprise, I swear I didn't expect Barry. :O I mean you said "the last person she wanted to see" so I'd expected someone she'd hate. Lol...but I really appreciate how you explain the reason that why was Barry the last person she wanted to see :P lol really loved it :D

Mann, atleast the girls should have let em explain, I felt atleast Dawn should have let Ash explain. :( but you've got everything planned, can't wait to see what you have stored in for us :D

Once again the characters were well kept in characters, and brilliantly done :D you always do. I didn't see any mistakes in this at all :D

Oh wow, this CLIFFY! Haha man, you're realy working this cliffy thingy great :P so much excitement and so much unexpectedness things to expect :p does that even make sense? :o well.. we should always expect the unexpected from you... that's what I learned from reading your work :D

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Haha I love it, I hope you love this review too, I had fun reading and reviewing this :D

Write more sooon, update :D

Wow I was way off. But I loved the chapter anyway XD I wonder what will happen next? Like everyone always does ;P At this point I don't know what I'll be expecting, but that's the great part, waiting to find out :)