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| PrairieSky 2003-12-07 ch 1,  | abuseWow, you really have made Abby come alive in this. Your skill as a writer is evident in the contrast between your Syd/Sark fics and something like this that is so completely different, but still well-written. Keep writing!! :) |
| Peregrine 2002-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, what a fun story and so very well-written. I always love to read stories about peripheral characters and you've really given Abby a life of her own. And the thought of Will in some little S&M game is too much.... Thanks for writing this. |
| WaterDancer 2002-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseRach, Thank you for doing Abby's POV. This was great, and also how I imagined how she would be. Sweaty Will is always a pretty picture in my mind. |
| Diana3 2002-04-30 ch 1, | abuseOooh... ahhh... I'll stick with the monosyllables. I like. I like very much :) |
| Lyme 2002-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! Snarky-British-cake-lady fic! For a character that's had less than 5 minutes screen time in the entire show, so far, you did a really great job of giving her personality. Plus, it's always refreshing to see some fic that isn't S/V-centric. |
| Thorne 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I love Abby from her three seconds of screen time, and you brought her to curious, detailed life. Plus, the overheard smut is pretty hot. :) |
| laras-dice 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. It's nice to get another perspective on things, and you did a really good job with the characterization of Abby. Wonderful details, too, and I loved the way you used the challenge line! |
| m 2002-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! Love hearing Abby's point of view. And you even made me think Will is sexy. |
| Kat1 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseI must share brain space with snarky-Abby-at-the-paper. Love that girl and this smoother than smooth characterisation. Of course, love the idea of sex-in-the-bathroom, the perfect headline -- oh -- and um Rach, sorta really, really understand how fic-inducing Ted Casablanca can be. Love it! |
| campysam 2002-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! Nice angle with the Abby perspective. And Will, the women's bathroom? Naughty, naughty boy. Love it :) |
| Leanne8582 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Good Headline. |
| icyfire 2002-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOh, Rach, you know I like this one! :) I love Abby on the show--what little we've seen of her--but your Abby has some incredible depth. With a few lines here and there, you give us a lot of detail about her life before we saw her on the show. I cannot help but like her. And her need to see is so easy to believe. Robin |