A great missing scene. You really got inside Jacob's head.

I did want it to go on.

Well done.

I love the way you decribe Jacob and Rachel's feelings for and about eachother! This missing scene fits perfectly. Thanks for reminding me of 'Mr. Shoes' too!

Very nice story. I was hoping it didnt end. As always, very true to character.

Ohhh please please give us more. I love your insights into Jacob's head and I want more.

Great writing interesting point of view that he was doing it because of Rachel. I really like that.

Another good missing scene! I liked the insights into both Rachel and Jacob's thoughts about the case and Maggie's death. Interesting thought that he embarked on the investigation mainly to get back with Rachel while she thinks it's because of his wife!