| Reviews for Timeline |
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TheLadyW 5/16/13 . chapter 8I like your version/use of turian culture. Well done. |
LadyXarity 2/26/13 . chapter 8I can't help it, i want to hear the rest of that story of what happened on shanxi with the other couple : |
Guest 12/11/12 . chapter 8 Seriously, this is one of the best I have read so far. I love how you describe relationship and feelings, hope that I can read more of you work soon. You make my day, I can't hold myself from smiling while reading through your fics. |
SilverFoxQueen 11/27/12 . chapter 8Aw, not fair. I so want to know their story. That and see where the relationship goes from here with Garrus and Shep, as this is a much firmer one than canon. Also, I think the games would go a bit different if they had these two as allies, as they seem to be fairly well connected. |
SilverFoxQueen 11/27/12 . chapter 6Well, I guess that answers my question from the previous story. That would be the beginning of Fisher and Nisus story. Would still be interested in learning the full scope of it though. Hmm, I wonder if it will pop up with the rest of this story? Well, time to continue reading then. |
Spyke1985 10/21/12 . chapter 8Man, I have no words. You've floored me yet again. You are a seriously fucking brilliant writer. Are you published? Because, if you are, I want to read whatever you've published. I've only seen a couple of writers on this site that I would say that to, because I'm very, VERY picky about the actual books I read, but I would love to read yours, if you have any out. Let me know. I'll gladly contribute to the cause. :) love |
Margot-Eve 7/26/12 . chapter 8Oh, so that's how Fisher and Nisus met xD fitting! ;] this was very good. |
Kriteni 7/20/12 . chapter 8That was really interesting! |
LoquaciousQuark 5/13/12 . chapter 8Oh my gosh, this was so charming and sweet and perfect I can't even find words for it. I have the biggest stupid grin on my face right now and it's all your fault, oh my goodness. Amazing. |
chickens 5/1/12 . chapter 8That was wonderful. :) |
White Ivy 4/30/12 . chapter 2Famous last words. |
Muslin 4/18/12 . chapter 8I read most of your stories, and they are just fantastic. This one, specifically, is very special to me because of the plot and the full circle in the end. It gave me peace, in the sense of starting something, taking you for a hell of a ride to a happy ending, and having a good epilogue to wrap everything up. This story gave me closure, and somehow eased the frustration caused by the lack of said closure in the ending of ME3. You really wrote them beautifully, thank you for this story, for all your stories! |
auPHE 3/8/12 . chapter 8You... You are brilliant. THIS is brilliant. It was short, simple, and sweet. Everything was wrapped up, it was beautifully written, and the mature scenes were smoking, to say the least. The only complaint I can managed to drudge up in my critique-based mind is that the formatting got a little wonky at places, but who cares WHEN THE STORY IS THAT GOOD. MY GOD. Yeah. I really loved this. C: Thank you for writing it! |
WastedHeart 2/13/12 . chapter 8I loved reading this. Your characterisation of Shepard and Garrus was very believable and the time travel plot kept me interested right up until the end. I read your other fic involving Fisher and Nisus and really liked both of them so it was great to see them again as well. |
Fujimiya.Kei 1/7/12 . chapter 8A fantastic read, smooth writing and compelling story. **content sigh** Now, what are the chances you will tell us what are Garrus' sources of such... in depth information? :D |