|Reviews for One Stormy Night|
| kursk 6/4/05 . chapter 3
This fic is great, It would be great if you could continue it.
| marzoog 5/25/02 . chapter 3
AWWWW! good chapter, please continue.
| Diamondflame 5/25/02 . chapter 3
very good plot...the only critiscm i have is to lay off on the word interesting - it pops up in almost every paragraph (too repetetive)
other than that excellent story and i can't wait for more
| marzoog 5/7/02 . chapter 2
OHHHH, Me like! Continue fellow West Wing fanatic!
| tunguska 5/1/02 . chapter 2
Write more! :-)
| SMKLegacy 4/29/02 . chapter 1
This is a good story and your dialogue flows pretty well. You should definitely keep writing, but it would be worthwhile to have someone proofread your final draft before you post for little errors in spelling and grammar.
Also, something you may want to pay attention to is repetition of words, especially adjectives. My own rule of thumb for adjectives is not to have the same word twice on any page of text if I can help it. A good thesaurus is an excellent way to hone vocabulary and expand your promising skills.
Thanks for posting this - and I'm looking forward to more.
| Megan L1 4/29/02 . chapter 1
Awww! That was good. I'd say you pretty much left in hanging, though- please write more!