|Reviews for Lucky|
| Time Cutter 4/17/13 . chapter 1
This, I really truly like. A nice fanfic depicting YuukoXMai; you have really made my day (actually, its night to me right now) better.
| Anonko 12/9/12 . chapter 1
Oh man, that was hilarious!
| Greenerin 12/6/12 . chapter 1
Super)) Thanks for the story!
| Rhyno Holter 12/1/12 . chapter 1
I've discovered where your writing style comes from. Well, not "comes from" but "reminds me of." Or, I guess since I watched the show after I'd read some of your stuff, it's the other way around?
While short, it's sweet. And the end to episode 5 was wonderful. I thought right then and there that Mai might have lied about her lie.
Hurray for lesyay!
While I do notice a few words that make some sentences awkward ("gratefulness" could be replaced with "gratitude"), I enjoyed it. Again, short and sweet. To the point.
...needs more fluff. HARRUMPH.
| M'lisss 9/5/12 . chapter 1
Wooo! I loved this! And I love voicing Yuuko! This was fun, thanks!
| GreenTeaLover 7/27/12 . chapter 1
Cute story! It was a fun read, and Yuuko was so jokes xD
| Shiken-chii 6/19/12 . chapter 1
I... I felt so happy upon stumbling upon this fanfic! And after reading this, I felt as if I've hit jackpot! XD
This is just so cute! And the thing is... this is a Yuuko/Mai fanfic! And I really, really adore that pairing! I really love the way that you had written them and the way you had depicted their pairing! They are just so cute together! XDDD
And I really like the way you had written this story! It makes me feel the Nichijou feel while reading this story... BUT STILL... YUUKO AND MAI ARE JUST SO CUUUTEEE! XDDD
The punchlines you had placed in this story are really... EPIC! XDDD
"Yuuko was so embarrassed her whole life flashed before her eyes."
That was just the funniest thing I had read in this story! XDDD I can just imagine her life flashing before her eyes while panicking although mostly, I think that this flashback would mostly consist of Mai's trolling on her? XD And the ending is just so... cute! At least the whole school knows that they are together! XD I don't know though whether Yuuko is lucky to have a troller lover or not... But at leats they are cute together! XD
I hope (REALLY, REALLY, HOPE) that you would be writing more Yukko/Mai fics! You are just so great at depicting their pairing! XDDD
PS. And Yuuko's "I'm going to be a papa!" UIS JUST SO. EPIC. XDDD
| meislovely 6/8/12 . chapter 1
Shiro: OMIGAWD THIS IS SO CUTE I LOVE IT!
Kuro: It was great! I hope you write more on this pairing!
| MichaelSaniyan 3/15/12 . chapter 1
You made Mai tolerable. You are god.
| The Bulbafinatic 3/3/12 . chapter 1
| Anonymous 1/24/12 . chapter 1
make more of this. make more fics of this pairiiiiiiiinngg.
onegaishimasu m(_ _)m
heh anyway, I love it! thumbs up ( '')bb
| s 1/14/12 . chapter 1
i am a man i had a nosebled trololololo
| AnimeCrazy195 1/10/12 . chapter 1
Fantastic. Glad someone also wrote a Nichijou fanfic, especially one about Mai and Yuuko!
| seerenigma 12/13/11 . chapter 1
Just wanted to thank you for writing this lovely little fic. I was disappointed at how scarce Nichijou fanfiction is so I wanted to make sure to comment on one I liked.
You definitely captured the humor of the series very well. From the sudden slapstick humor to the excessive exaggeration of emotions like one's "spirit diving into the sun." I really enjoyed Yuuko's ALL CAPS reaction and the closer with her mother knocking her across the room.
My only two criticisms:
I felt like Mai spoke a little too much. You definitely didn't go overboard but I felt like hearing so many words from her was almost out of character. This is a difficult thing to improve though considering the nature of her character in the show is to be quiet except for delivering a few punch lines.
If you write another fic for this pairing (and I hope you do) I'd try to basically take any line from her and try to come up with a way to say the same thing in even less words.
ex:"That was my first kiss." to "...My first kiss."
The second point is the "Plan B" I praised your ability to stay true to the show's humor in creative ways but using the exact same gag that appeared in an episode was just a little disappointing. If you did this because you intended the event to actually take place in the same episode I guess that's understandable though.
I hope I was of some help, thanks again for writing!
| Melancholixe 12/8/11 . chapter 1
Ehh, signed up because of this fic :O
I'm quite Mai x Yukko fan but... lets that fact not affecting my review ze
I like your fics, it sure has humor senses, so much like Nichijou , aside only two parts that I couldn't imagine at all
Yukko's reaction - "...FOR THE BABY" [... for Anti Spoil]
That's one part I couldn't really imagine, considering the action was taken by Yukko is only.. Ehhh... Ehh... something that's wont really causing such... (It's a funny joke but.. hard to understand, unless she said "I'll take responsibility for it" which actually sounds too common at the same time, but easier to understand.. Unless you came up with thoughts that Nichijou's jokes are hard to understand as well)
BUT! Overall, I liked it! I wish there's more Mai x Yukko ; ;