Um yeah I've read better... A lot better... The writing is choppy, the story is boring and kinda stupid, and the characters are too OOC- Lindy would NOT think that she was gonna puke when she saw him! And really? The ending is that he licks Lindy's nose and she screams. Uh, ok, that was a nice ending. The only good thing in this story was the proposal, because it was so sweet. But sorry, I still give it a thumbs down.

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