You did a good job with the script formatting.

You know, you should just help write the script too. xD I love it!

Cool! A script! You should write the movie :D

Great job on this chapter! I love what you did to show Amma's personality more, and I love the flashback. I would also like to mention that with where you put the story under , they have a section under books for the Beautiul Creatures(formally known as the Caster Chronicles series)series. So, you may want to move it there to attract more views, because this story is great! Can't wait until you update again, and great job! :)

I loved this sooo much! I'm a huge fan of the Beautiful Creatures series, and I'm always looking for fanfictions about the series. This was truly great. It would even be a good script for the movie, or at least, it was very similiar to what I had envisioned. I loved how you even showed more of the personalities of the side characters, such as Emily and Savannah. Please write more!

Oh I love this series! Please continue with the rest of the script!