Cool story so far! Mercury's my favorite character, probably because it's my favorite color. But my personal favorites are Pluto and Neptune, hurry and update soon. Oh by the way, thanks for reviewing my stories, especially my 5th book, I'm glad some people still read it even though it's complete. Yes, I like all those anime's, do you like Evangelion? That's my all time favorite! Anyway, hurry and update

This would be abit better if u had gotten Mercury's attack right. 'Mercury Aqua Rapsoidy'(sp?) not 'Mercury Aqua Illusion'. LOL _

HI! It's AA-Chan! Anyway, thanks for the advice of anonymous reviews! On your story, (just a tip), paint the scenery in your head and write it down on paper/computer, that way the readers can see what's happening. Other than that, love the story! It's been a while since I read/saw Sailor Moon & Scouts, so you're the first tp bring back memories! Keep writing and updating the story! I want to find out what's going to happen to the other Scouts!

Hey, thanks for tellin me this chap was up! It was great. I enjoyed it. Also, here's some grammer errors that I noticed. Instead of spelling "obvious" o-b-v-i-o-u-s, you spelled it "ovyeuse" and "grate" is suppose to be spelled "great" and don't worry, this is NO FLAME! this was so good! You gotta post the next chapter up A.S.A.P!

hey! thanks for reviewing my story! your story is nice but...I hope you won't get angry... I guess that you should fix up the dialogs a bit. I get confused and don't know who's speaking to who or simply who's speaking. But hey! your story is great!

I LOVE SAILOR MOON! But then...I thought this was kinda confusing because I forgot the Sailor Senshis' names...so could you please tell me their names in the future chapter, and tell me which senshi they are so I have an idea as to who they are. I just kind of forgot their names because on Toonami, they stopped showing Sailor Moon! (stupid Toonami!) Well please post the next chapter up A.S.A.P! This is pretty good for your first fic. -

Hello!

Your fic is pretty good! Although you can work on the spelling a little bit... Anyway, good start!

Crystal Child

PS I live in Canada too!

Thank you for reading my story. Anyway, I don't know if It's me or the story but I got confuse because of the dialogues, Please make the dialogues into paraghraps. Sorry if i said that, in the contrary your's has a great start and I want to know what happened next.

Great beginning to your story. One thing that you need to work on is the spellin mistakes that you have. Doesn't Microsoft Word pick up spelling mistakes though?

Anyways, your story is great. If you don't mind, please email me and inform me that your second chapter to this fic is up so that I could read and review it again. Thanks.

Hey! Thanks for the review on my fic .- Anyway, nice fic, good storyline.

A few minor spelling errors but I really liked it.

I was wondering how you could review unless you are 20 or somehting you should be in school.

I go to church school and we had the day off so that is why I am not at school doing math at the moment.

Hey do you like pokemon if you do please go read my pokemon story,.

Great story! Thanks for letting me be the one to spell-check! _