that was the first ZoRo i've read an I liked it! The start was pretty funny too :] good job!

sensational..

Haha great chapter! Wish I could dish out some improvements and I can't think of anything, nice job!

Your Zoro seems a little too forward. I had always envisioned him as being vaguely intimidated by Robin (even though i ship this pairing as well), but this was a good bit of semi-smut nonetheless

Just one word: SEXY!

Great use of adjectives...exactly what is needed for an awesome romance story! I'm amazed I inspired you to write this. I'm really happy that I did! Thanks for sharing :D

FUCKING...AMAZING!

That was INSANELY HOTT!

You cant stop writing there! We need to see how much Zoro liked it! ;)

hehehehe...Excellent writing.

love it! oh and i think i've seen the pic you based it on! is it in black and white? anyway Amazing story! :D

LOVE IT! Please make more ZoRo!

KYAA! / I LOVES IT! OOH, PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE, PRETTY PLEASE! I LOVE ZORO X ROBIN FICS! I want another one-shot of hot and sexy ZoRo! Kyaa!

Oh, yeah... I also wanted to ask where you found that picture you mentioned. I''d like to see it.

And again: LOVED THIS! PLEASE DO ANOTHER ONE!

That was beautiful. Wish RobinxZoro was canon

Oh who wouldnt watch him! Watching hott guys lift weights with their rippling muscles... phew! -fans self- Loved it! LEMONY-SPICE!

That was great!

I liked everything about it,

Keep up the great work!

That was HOT! I absolutely love it! More more more MORE! More ZoroxRobin!

Even though I'm not a fan of ZoRo... :e

I think the plot was well-developed, and the story seemed to fit well together :) Amazingg job yet again PerhapsNever