|Reviews for An Entity, My Own|
| Wow 3/1/13 . chapter 7
Likely the best rendition of this kind of relationship (or the buildup and development thereof) that I've ever read on this site. You say you shy from your own previous writing and yet all I can see is a very raw, beautifully executed story. It's like you are naturally talented in storying; this emphasis on perfect literature and language in favor of getting the actual story across rather bewilders me, as I can easily say I prefer your fic to a multidue of other "better written" tales. Yours is captivating and is written scarily akin to JK's own portrayal of these core characters. Voldemort was literally growing obsessed with the Boy Who Lived, and your shift in his view of Harry now that he is aware the Horcrux hidden there, is excitingly realistic. I always found LV/HP fics in which Voldemort is uncaring of Harry in any way other than a toy of sorts to abuse, as oddly unbelievable. There was not one rile that Harry threw that failed to get a (rather intense) rise out of the Dark Lord. Toward DH especially, he was so off his rocker that he was finding indirect comfort in the reassurance of his Death Eaters remaining loyal in "heart" to him (the film illustrated this nicely with his oneway embrace of Draco lol) which does hint at a backward sort of hollowness in him - loneliness being the wrong word. But he seemed to lose sight of everything really, so hellbent on pursuing Harry and the destruction of his past/Hogwarts.
This paradigm shift whereby he is aware of Harry-as-his-Horcrux is something very rarely done well in fanfiction. There you are cringing at your writing lol and the rest of us have our arms out in longing.
I would love to Beta if you still one an extra hand in that. Happy to throw over a FB and other details if needed, but my email is
Keep up the fab work, you are an incredibly talented writer with a gift for showing us, rather than telling us, a story. Rare indeed...
| ulqui's-girl 2/17/13 . chapter 6
/ Harry's already reacting to Tom! :D
| ulqui's-girl 2/17/13 . chapter 5
Awwww! 3 They're so cute! OMG Lol the Death Eaters are so shocked XD
| ulqui's-girl 2/16/13 . chapter 4
Go Harry! Urgh Ginny -''
| ulqui's-girl 2/16/13 . chapter 2
OMG! Almost romantic moment there!
| Rubellite Game 1/16/13 . chapter 7
Just make sure that in the redone story's summary it states that its a redo of An Entity, My Own.
| D. Akisira R.T.M.S 11/16/12 . chapter 7
i hope you finish editing your story and repost it soon. I really enjoy this version of your story and can't wait for you re-edited version because i'm sure it would be a fantastic read.
| Abby -WCD 10/18/12 . chapter 6
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, and I congratulate you on going back and rewriting your stories. I'm not sure if you've mentioned it prior, but what new username are you planning on reposting this story under?
| Zephel 10/17/12 . chapter 7
Under what name will it be posted? And when? ]
| ThisIstheWaytheWorldEnds 10/17/12 . chapter 7
I hope you finish soon :) Could you post a chapter here telling us when the new story is up? Knowing me ill probably forget...
| moonlitcat 10/16/12 . chapter 7
you should post up a chapter here when the new story is up.
| ZippyStar 10/16/12 . chapter 7
Could you please tell me when the new version is posted? Thanks, I look forward to it :)
| misto713 10/16/12 . chapter 7
Hmm, well get a better written story, you say? :3 I love well written stories. Not that I didnt like this one, otherwise I wouldnt subscibe. If you really dont like it, its better if you change it now rather than loose all "creatve juices" and abandon the story.
Btw, will you post it in THIS "story", or as a new story under the same author profile? Should I watch and wait on your author profile or will the subsciption of this story still work? If I may ask - when you post the new version, post an update here and say something like "new story will be called XX and can be found on my profile" - so that I know I should update my alert list and subscribe to the new one.
Good luck with the re-write :)
| 13AkiraKuranXIII 10/16/12 . chapter 7
This is a brilliant story, one of the best I've read, so I'm thrilled to read you haven't given up on it and are rewriting it. I hope we can expect an update in the near future!
| Guest 10/16/12 . chapter 7
well this story is really good and interesting as it is but if you say that you think you have improved in your writing style then I think we should expect and wait for a better one.. Good Luck with that.. :)