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FireLilli 2/16/12 . chapter 20
Aww, poor Cepter, having to fight Lena. And Lena having to be brainwashed. Yet I still have no idea what will happen next...
Casaric 2/2/12 . chapter 19
Well, unless someone bursts in out of nowhere and saves them, I'd say Calico is pretty much left with two options. He can either tell the truth...or he can lie, and lead them off in the wrong direction. That gives them time to think of a way to escape, and protects Cepter.
FireLilli 2/2/12 . chapter 19
What will happen? I don't know... and I don't have any ideas...
BatmanBeyond 2/2/12 . chapter 19
Nice chapter, didnt expect that to happen.

I hope you dont have Averia killed, despite whatever happens next.

Anyway update soon.
BatmanBeyond 1/18/12 . chapter 18
Nice chapter, thanks for including my OC.

You've portrayed her accuartly and perfectly.

Update soon.
BatmanBeyond 1/14/12 . chapter 17
Nice story.

Cant think of much feedback to give at the moment.

Have an OC you can use.

Name : Averia.

Age : 17

Gender : Female

Apperance :Caucasian, has smoth, clear skin. Long light green neon hair that goes down to her behind and gold eyes. Wears grey spiked gauntlets and iron boots. She wears black trousers and a black vest. Also wears a long black cape

Bio : A mercenary(though bad at her job) hired by Scrarfaux to kill Cepter.

Personality :Seductive, short tempered, naive ,flirty. Would beg for mercy if her life is threatened.

Weapon : A short katana with ice around the blade.
Casaric 1/12/12 . chapter 17
This chapter was well worth the wait. So, as far as I can tell, Ravos is good guy now, ( I knew it was gonna happen sooner or later.) and few of Cepter's friends are no longer fit for combat. Que can't really judge distances anymore, Thane can't really fight at all, and Ivan...well...you get the point. Calico and the rest of the group are currently seperated, so in actuality, all Cepter has to go up against Scrarfaux is himself and Ravos. A formidable force, for sure...but will it be enough?
Casaric 1/10/12 . chapter 16
An excellent chapter, can't wait to see how this plays out.
Anything170 12/29/11 . chapter 16
Awesome chapter and I'm going to put Ivan in my profile soon. Update soon
FireLilli 12/29/11 . chapter 16
Awesome. Does anyone notice I am the only person here who reviews constantly? Oh well. Okay anyway bye and update soon!
Casaric 12/19/11 . chapter 15
Name- Ravos

Age- 19

Looks- His hair is spiky and black and his skin is slightly tanned. His eyes are sea green. He wera plate armor that covers his etire body except for his head, and the armor is decorated with intricate designs and bears Scrarfaux's crest.

History- His parents were killed when he was a baby by Scrarfaux soldiers, who then took him in as a son. He showed signs of harboring powers the likes of which no-one has ever seen before, so when he was old enough, he joied Scrarfaux's army. He quickly rose through thew ranks, and became Scrarfaux's most trusted general. He never learned the truth behind his parent's death, and Srcarfaux ordered his men to keep it that way.

Personality- A loyal and obedient soldier. He puts his men's saftey before his own, and even more so for Scrarfaux. He hates traitors and people who run away from a fight. He likes to fight, but does not want this war. "War is a plauge, the longer it's around, the worse off everyone is."

Power- He can run at nearly the speed of sound, rendering him invisible when he does, and can shoot off beams of concentrated energy from his gauntlets. When people get to close he can also realse a large amount of it in an a close-range explosion. When he needs to, he can unlock his Ultimate Form, making him a much harder opponet. Ultimate Form gives him massive angle wings, A massive sword, and a mssive shield, all made out of energy.

Weapon- Bladed Gauntlets
FireLilli 12/5/11 . chapter 14
Very starnge chapter... And violent. But the ending was a bit romantic, which was cute. I, personally, like this chapter. Okay, bye and update soon!
FireLilli 11/28/11 . chapter 13
No Cepter, no you cannot. Awesome chapter. Okay well, bye and update soon!
Casaric 11/13/11 . chapter 12
Name- Thane Dasgard

Age- 21

Looks- His whole body is covered in a strange purple, skin-like growth, so he wears a cloak to hide it.

History- Was infected by an evil parasite known as the Chaos. He left home and began fighting against the parasite with all his will power. When his green eye turns purple, he'll be completly in the Chaos's control.

Personality- A bit distant, often jumps to conclusions.

Power- Ensnares a group of enemies' minds using Chaos, making them fight for him.

Weapon- Greatsword
FireLilli 11/13/11 . chapter 12
No promises. 'U' Anywayyyyyyy I did get the Nuts joke. Trust me, never EVER try to pick a fight with Eli. You'll end up a dead man. Okay so bye and update soon!
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