Excellent. I think it expresses the feeling of death's breach very well. How sad that Braxx has no memory of before though. I Loved it, cannot wait for the next chapter.

I just realized that several people have asked direct questions but I have never replied to them :( I am sorry for that. In the future I will try to address all of your questions :D

It's not my fault a new expansion came out :p lol

Took you long enough to update! Good chapter as always, better see the next one out SOON. You owe us - i.e., your readers - that much, Az.

Good writing, and well told story. :)

Read the whole thing tonight. Now you have to finish it. I...need...more...NOW! LOL Love it, keep up the great work!

I like your story!

LOL, thanks Frosty p I'm trying to put out more chapters, the entire story is there in my noodle, its just taking forever to jot them down into a coherent work lol. Chapter 8 is up now and chapter 9 will follow hopefully in a few days. Keep enjoying :D

You know, you"re evil. You give me a chapter and blow up the embers of hope and just sit there while I wait excited for the next chapter... and wait... and wait... and JUST when I lose faith and begin to move on - BAM! Rinse and repeat.

You, sir, art a villain.

Awsome story so far. And this chapter not only kept my attention but has me chomping at the bit. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Coren As was explained in my A/N in ch6, I have altered Lore to fit my story. Blizzard made some nice story points but mine mesh better than theirs. I KNOW every mistake I'm making and don't need to be educated by every fanboy out there. Be less anal-retentive and just enjoy the story for what it is.

1-I needed a human settlement in Kalimdor, and as it was Jaina's father, Admiral Proudmoore that founded Theramore, I figured that the exact date of it's building would be pre-WC3

2-I know Alleria left before the events of Wrath, as I explained in ch6's notes.

3-Vereesa was of marrying age during that time frame and Lore never explained the exact date of their marriage, I looked it up, this was added to put another face in my tale.

You will notice that Faol and Benedictus's time frames are precise tho :p

Just enjoy the story at face value

As a major lore nerd, it is painful to see how many errors in lore you are making.

1. Theramore was not made until after the events of WC3, humans never went to Kalimdor until WC3.

2. Alleria went through the dark portal at about the same time that Vereesa even met Rhonin.

3. the time from the dark portal being closed again to the start of WC3 is a few years, not months.

Cookies for obviously looking up the Thassarian language, I do love when people remember canon. Keep it up, Az, and do make us wait a little less time, will you?

- Frostfyre

Awsome story that you are writing. I saw some grammer errors but asside from that I love your work. Keep up the great job. Tho I'm curious about if your going to be doing a time shift for how things go or are you just going to be doing it one step at a time.

You understand how this affects my desire for a happy ending for all? .

LOL, awesome chapter Az, I love the story, and the struggle and the example of what lengths grief will drive us. Azaraiah has an incredible weight to carry, so it says much for what he does for others. It's a very emotional look into his past that helps so much to demonstrate who and what he is. And t

he profit in the eastern kingdom just screams..."where is chapter five?"

-hugs-

Raidy