|Reviews for Lost In Paradise|
| luvmusic87 3/2/13 . chapter 2
Man, this is really good so far. When us the next chapter?
| TiffanieFaythe25 11/23/12 . chapter 1
I am interested so can I help? By the way, this is an amazing story! Please continue! I really like you and the story!
| TiffanieFaythe25 11/23/12 . chapter 2
Hey! I am rather interested in co writing with you! So yeah, you said pm you r
| Animefreak0213 11/4/12 . chapter 1
I think you should make her look like kaylee but make her have different color hair so she isn't exactly like her
| Allstoriesrock so do authors 8/22/12 . chapter 2
Come on! This is soooo good! What's the pairing? Kaylee/Nash? Kaylee/Tod?
| Jayde 7/27/12 . chapter 2
Pls update I love it so far
| DeanW'sBabyGirl 7/16/12 . chapter 2
I love the plot and wish there were more creative people like u in the world. Review soon
| AstonMimiko 5/1/12 . chapter 2
AMAZING. U can hardly tell it isnt the original writer... By the by, Rachel Vincent, read some of her series' so I can truly say you create and amazing, interesting storyline. :)
| AstonMimiko 12/30/11 . chapter 1
great first chapter. So, is it supposed to be that Kaylee's soul just transferred to someone born on the exact night she died. U could make it kind of like wat happens (if u've ever read it) Dead Beautiful by Yvonne Woon except that instead of Kaylee's soulless body trying to find the person with her soul its the Hudson brothers looking. She could start having flashbacks or something from a life she doesnt remember and in her dreams (nightmares) she dies how Kaylee did. that as soon as she was the same age Kaylee was wen she died lots of really weird stuff starts happening. Anyway, it doesnt matter if u use this idea. ur a great writer without any help from wat i've seen and i cant wait to read ore :)
| hartleysgirl 12/19/11 . chapter 1
So please update soon! I have a feeling that this could be really good, I would make her a little more confident in herself, but still herself just add a high self-esteem to her wonderful list of traits, i would make her curvier just so she would have a chance to feel what it would be like to have guys just throw them selves at her other then the hudson boys, cause it seems from the books she doesnt understand much of that.
| YourDemonicAssassin 12/15/11 . chapter 1
the person who was going to co-write with me doesn't want to i think, i have to check with her again and check on a couple of things, but if your interested in co-writing this story just PM me.
| NJ 12/14/11 . chapter 1
i like the idea...its seems like it can be a really good story. Are you still interested in a co-writer?
| juxtaposed92 11/10/11 . chapter 1
Love the first chapter. I think you should keep her similar to Kaylee with maybe a few subtle differences. I am a bit confused though, is she a bean sidhe? Does she know all about bean sidhe's since her best friend is one? Also does that mean that her new parents also have 'powers' of sorts?
Hope you update soon.