Very powerful, in my opinion.

And don't mind me, just trolling through your other things. :)

You are a bad, bad, bad person for killing Sam like that for Halloween.

Wow...oaky so that was definitaly not the ending I was expecting to read. Loved this, I love it when Dean is rambling inside his own mind. Wonder what the hell happened to Sam tough.

...all he knows is come hell or high water he needs the sound to go away.-You subtle, little thing, you! Sneaking in that nice water imagery. Literary yumminess!

Whoa Nelly! That was scary! You know the rules, missy. No breaking the toys! /flog flog!

That was pretty awesome...you know...in a twisted, gruesome, freaky kind of way. ;)

yes, but is his kidney missing?

this made laugh. sorry. '-_-

I gasped. Literally.

Got to the end and the knowledge that it was Sam was like a punch in the gut. Very chilling and deceiving with the whole 'I have to turn off the faucet while I'm sick and hurt *grumble*' Brilliant, I bow to you.

d! omg! absolutely horrifying! so glad halloween has put you in the right mood! :) mel

Ooh good story!

I like how Dean is all woah is me Sammy should be looking after me when Sam was way worse off. . . But that's okay, he's never going to stay dead for more than a commercial break :P (except for in Dark Side of The Moon)

Oh no, not Sam :(

Anyway, really enjoyed it. Loved the repetition of the drip drip drip :)

Oh, you are evil! EVIL!

Yikes! I'm all the way awake now and not going to sleep any time soon!

Great horror fic.