i dont quite know what it it about youre writing that makes it so wonderful. it just is. and i know i dont do oneshots but ive been fininding myself reading them. i dont go really lookingfor them. i guess its after i have read some work that i truely admire and just crave more of it and thus i turn to their oneshots because it still carries that atmosphere if not the story.
well- ill stop there. but yeah this was good as is all your other work. i do like the fact that he went to an upperclass type military academy..you know like those type of thanks. i must go back to feeding my addiction.

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. Never call it boring! You are talented at writing and know what is and isn't good for a story. Once or twice you used bigger words when plainer ones would have flown better, but other than that this story was great! Please write another story so I don't have to read all of this drivel and can actually read something written by a talented person.

::sigh:: that was beautiful! I loved the way you portrayed Tristan. ::sigh:: all your work is lovely.

And no I'm not asking for a sequel b/c this fic is perfect as it is. And yes, spreading the HA love is a very, very, very good thing.

Priya

I loved that! That was definitely insiteful, colorful, and down right fascinating. You have an unique and way more interesting definition for Fan Fiction (pardon the pun)! That was amazing!

I've been wanting to review this but I've been a slacker. Gah.

I don't think the lack of dialogue detracts from the fic since this is clearly a get-in-Tristan's-head kind of fic. And well, you get into his head really well. (Okay, my mind just went to a dirty place. Gah. Damn Tristan and Tristan-related dirty thoughts!)

Completely loved the last two lines. It sums up everything very well. :)

that was great! please continue, maybe have it be like a year later, when he returns, and he sees Rory again and they fall in love! please keep writing! TRORY please!

Hey there! I loved this fic. And so no siree, I'm not gonna beg you for a sequel, or for Rory's thoughts or anything of the sort. Not me. This is a great one-shot fic. I love how Tristan hated her and then loved her. You have his emotions down beautifully. Love the angsty HA. Ah, spread the HA love. 'Tis a wonderful thing.

this roix! MORE DAY DREAMS! c'mon, you know you want to... what about Rory daydreaming about Tristan, Tristan's parents daydreaming, a memory of Tristan and his mother talking at the funeral, confessions of Tristan's bunk mate...

This is really good. I honestly think that it could be expanded into more of a story though if you wanted to! :O)

I loved it. It was really good...very true. The no dialouge was not boring, it was good. I like it. Keep up the good work and I hope you write more angst soon.:)

very good

boredom, what boredom? i didn't find any here. i actually really liked your fic, especially the comment about WASPs(ain't it the truth). keep writing, even if it isn't a continuation:)

I opened this and read your author's note and burst out laughing. I think the Fectas are having a bad influence on you. It's scary that the term 'Hotass' has progressed so far. [And we don't mind if you borrow it for a bit, since HA was meant to be shared ;) .] Also, I hate to say it, but is our non-Trory oblivion writing style also spreading? I don't think I need to tell you I liked it, because you're writing exactly on my level. Keep up the ficlet/no dialogue work and I look forward to more. Two thumbs up.