this is really badly written, no offence. and u dont get fake guns 'out of cornflake boxes'

huh? that mum is terrible. if i was mollie i would just call the police. and how did the dads house burn down? did mollie do it and blame it on her invisible brother jamie?

wtf?! hes so dumb! that dad's excuse is the most pathetic excuse ive ever heard an adult say.
'oh, i had a job offer so i'll just walk out on my wife with her two young kids and never come back yah.'
and why isnt mollie forcing her mum to take counselling if shes mental? WEEKS went by and jamie keeps telling her too! grrr...
good fanfic though. :)

HUHH? Who the hell lets a dumb beetch like that 'bully' pick on her? if she came to my school, she'd be dead in praticlly five seconds!
Good fanfic so far, by the way. :)