Great ghost story! I've enjoyed all your stories, and it's inspiring to see how your writing style has continued to improve.

It would be interesting to do a follow up on this fic, to see how Alan recovers...

Ooooook... That was only alot creeptastic! I don't think I'll be getting much sleep tonight XP

Anyway, besides the creep factor x 1000, which you totally nailed, it was a cool story, very well written, and totally left open for creepy sequel 2.0! XD Can't wait! ;)

Really good(: Love it!

Great story. I'm originally from the Beechworth area and have to confess I had not heard all the stories you mentioned but you have got me interested. Although I think I will pass on the Halloween tours :-)

What a small world! I live in a town called Wangaratta that is half an hour away from Beechworth! Mayday Hills is quite the freaky place too, nice setting for a Halloween Fic! Good Work!

I would realy like it if you would do a POV from Alan's brothers and dad. I'm dieing to know what was going through each of their heads when Alan as missing and when they found him. Loved the halloween story, very freaky and cool! :D :D

ohhhhhhhhhhh creepy!

Poor Alan