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lol love it!

That was so kawaii ! I love fictions that involve Usagi's family, especially when they learn everyone's alter egos. Even though it's short, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Arigato TsukiNoBara-sempai, ja ne !

I thought it was very nice! I especially like when Shingo said: "Only if you catch me!" So totally a thing a little brother would say!

this was a great story. thank you

I LOVE IT! (and on and on)

Very good. If there is any problem, it is that your paragraphs are not spaced out.

No offense but your story is a wee whack as if the past Usagi found then she would have all ready known when she became the future serenity but then how could her future self have just learned that if Shingo had just blurted it out unless the future Usagi forgot all about that. It doesn't matter.

I love that awkward moment stuff.

Cute! I always wonder what he'd do if he found out. But put more detail in, 'cause it's a bit abrupt at the end. Of course, my stories are worse, so ignore me.

Thank you for reviewing my story!

This was really creative! I've read other stories about how Shingo discovers his big sister's secret other life, but I've never seen him meet Pluto or go into the future. It does make sense, though, that he might get suspicious at Usagi's unusual mood swings, due of course to senshi business he would never understand given his lack of knowledge about her being a senshi. That was a long, awkward sentence! Anyways, thanks for writing! And read my other SM stories! :)

how cute! i always did like to think about how shingo might find out the truth, though i'm a little surprised that pluto was so casual about it. still, i liked the whole thing with the diary. good story.

I liked this story! It was excellanto! Magnificino! Yepyep. Wonderfulness...

Hey! It was funny! Wasn't what I expected (should have by the name lol), but it was good. Your palace seems awesome. Good job! :)

That was very cute!