|Reviews for The Insight of Haruhi Suzumiya|
| Anonymous 6/11/12 . chapter 2
Great story, and foreshadowing, too. I like the style.
| stephen 5/17/12 . chapter 2
I'll be honest with you, I've been trying to find a good Haruhi fic for the last week and this is the only one that's really gotten me hooked! You've got the characters and the Haruhi vibe down perfectly. I was so sad to see it hadn't been updated in so long... Please, please, if you ever have the time, write more.
| croquant 3/17/12 . chapter 2
You are an incredible writer! I just stumbled upon your Haruhi works and devoured them all. I honestly can't tell that English is not your first language. When I have more time, I will review each story individually but for now I'll comment on a few things I noticed in most of your fics. Firstly the philosophical bent is extremely well done; you explain enough about the original premise for the unassuming reader, and have specific and interesting events leading up to these explanations so it doesn't feel dry. Characterizations are mostly to a tee, including actions and dialogue, though I do suggest limiting all contractions/idiomatic/vaguely colloquial expressions regarding Yuki, unless you intend to show a strong shift in her emotions, etc. I thoroughly enjoyed all the plots I have read so far, no matter how dark they seemed at first. Specifically, I commend you for your strict accordance of following a structured story yet still remaining very creative. It's so difficult to stay 'inside the box' yet still manage to write a compelling story that introduces new plots/in your case, even insights. Also, your prologues and conclusions never feel redundant or boring to read. I sincerely hope that this aspect of your writing - following a concrete outline to the end without deviation - will be present in your future works too, since you're very talented at it!
In conclusion, I wish you the best of luck in all your future writing endeavors. And I honestly urge you to continue The Insight. I'll save my current suspicions regarding the plot till the end and see if I was right or not :D
| Braying Donkeys 11/27/11 . chapter 1
Awesome. Just Awesome.
I can't wait for more.
In chapter 2, howevever, you repeated the word must twice.
Another error was that one of the lines (I can't remember which chapter, sorry) the character should've said "Nothing IN particular", rather than "nothing particular"
But it's a credit to to your English that I read both chapters at least nine times before even spotting the errors.
Seriously, it's that good.
| Frenschel Boo 11/26/11 . chapter 2
I can't believe I missed this!
I just finished re-reading the Surprise trilogy and the books instantly had me craving for more good Haruhi stories.
You've got Kyon's narrative down pat, and save for one tiny error, your standards of grammar and vocabulary are so high, it's scary. I've always enjoyed your stories- your storylines are incredibly unique- if only I could come up with some that were as good as yours! I know I sound like I'm over-praising,but really, I can't find anything in the prologue to criticise you on! Good Luck!
| Andmeuths 11/24/11 . chapter 2
Outstandingly written , and up to your usual high standards! Everything fits well. The characters are almost perfectly captured , even Koizumi , who can often be very hard to write at times.
It almost makes me think I'm actually reading the real work itself , not a fanfic!
It's still early days yet though , so I've not much to comment on the plot , but you have certainly managed to make a potentially boring build up chapter highly engaging and vividly portrayed!
| burntvanilla 11/19/11 . chapter 1
Lovely job. This is exactly like the novels' writing and I hope to see more. Keep it up! You're quite talented.
| Anmynous 10/29/11 . chapter 1
Oh awesome, I've actually gotten to read those last three novels so now I can actually read fics like these
While nothing much happens in this chapter, it feels very much like the real thing, both in how it sets a lot of things up while leaving the reader clueless (probably) as well as the style born of Kyon's thoughts. What IS your secret?
There's probably an "I" missing from near the beginning of the very last paragraph, but this was literally the only technical issue I noticed, so excellent work in that aspect as well.
| Asa from Gamma 10/29/11 . chapter 1
Hi it's me from a mobile device! My real internet is having trouble but luckily I have backup! By the time I got done reading this it seems as though I detected a nod-off to another fiction I read before bit I'm not 100% positive as to which story it was but it certainly began with Kyon having the same occupation and location. I think it was Duran's 'Later' that I miss but correct me if I'm wrong.
Anyhow it goes without saying that a fiction that acknowledges recent novel events are always welcome. This tale carries a mighty aura of peace. It makes me wonder if the future of the novels will have a moment of calm.
At first glance it is difficult for me to expect what direction this fiction is going but rest assured I will be watching!