|Reviews for Crescent Borne|
| emmalilly21 5/5/13 . chapter 6
They are what? Six and half months along? Do Cesarian and the babies would survive as well as Mercy. Werewolf healing in the babies hellloo
| Kkat84 1/31/12 . chapter 3
Good story so far. You've got Mercy's voice down pretty well, and the plot is interesting. Nitpicky point for this chapter-so far, Mercy does not know the story about Bran being enslaved to his mother, breaking free, and then going insane. She knows he is old, but not how old he is. She glimpsed his berserker form when he spoke to her mind to mind in Silver Borne, but she didn't know what it meant.
Also, silver borne is not a term for Zee. It's only been used as a description of the book thingy that Ariana made. Zee refers to himself as a gremlin, and is also called a Metallzauber (spelling?).
Like I said, nitpicky stuff, but noticeable to someone who's read the books way too many times.
| shycoyotegirl 1/21/12 . chapter 15
| EZeeBaby 12/21/11 . chapter 15
I loved it! But noo it can't be over!
I am all for a crossover as long as it is predominantly Mercy...I really really really Hate Bella and Edward..( i'm more a Jacob/Nessie shipper! Team Jacob!), so about reading about THEM kinda sucks. BUt I want more so bad, I wouldn't be opposed to it. One request though..can we have some more cute Mercy/Adam moments? I just love em! Hope to read more soon!
| Ashterbowden 12/21/11 . chapter 15
You can't just end it here! We need to know who attacked mercy and why! And I'm all for the new story!
| SnixX321 12/20/11 . chapter 14
I love the chapter! And the qoutes, they were good. :) Thanks for the update. I hope you update Thursday but I'll understand if you don't (Christmas wrapping and everything, after all).
| Canadian girl eh 12/17/11 . chapter 13
Oh my goodness! I came across this story by a chance and I'm so glad I did! Though this chapter had me in tears!
| EZeeBaby 12/8/11 . chapter 13
aww man that was intense! but i loved it! so worth the wait and totally looking forward for more
| ZuliaGirl 12/7/11 . chapter 13
That was so sad! :'( so wonderfully written though! I think she should die, but then have uncle mike bring her back like Mary Joe was brought back. Then they can say that she did indeed die and the order was completed and the punishment fulfilled. Can't wait to read the next! Good luck with the computer!
| Mercy's Wolf Pack 12/7/11 . chapter 13
OMG No mercy cant die
| wolf lover of michigan 12/6/11 . chapter 13
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I need to know what happens.
| SnixX321 12/6/11 . chapter 13
Omigosh...if you don't update soon...gosh...I cried. I did. Just a little. Your story is just...amazing. I love it. Update ASAP. Like. I really hope the next chapter will be up really soon! Please. For my sanity's sake...
| Mercy's Wolf Pack 11/23/11 . chapter 12
What... The Babies... What is going to happpen cant wait to find out
| wolf lover of michigan 11/20/11 . chapter 12
loved it please update soon
| mitzyspain 11/16/11 . chapter 12
read it all today, I couldn't stop,very interesting