They are what? Six and half months along? Do Cesarian and the babies would survive as well as Mercy. Werewolf healing in the babies hellloo

Good story so far. You've got Mercy's voice down pretty well, and the plot is interesting. Nitpicky point for this chapter-so far, Mercy does not know the story about Bran being enslaved to his mother, breaking free, and then going insane. She knows he is old, but not how old he is. She glimpsed his berserker form when he spoke to her mind to mind in Silver Borne, but she didn't know what it meant.

Also, silver borne is not a term for Zee. It's only been used as a description of the book thingy that Ariana made. Zee refers to himself as a gremlin, and is also called a Metallzauber (spelling?).

Like I said, nitpicky stuff, but noticeable to someone who's read the books way too many times.

great story!

I loved it! But noo it can't be over!

I am all for a crossover as long as it is predominantly Mercy...I really really really Hate Bella and Edward..( i'm more a Jacob/Nessie shipper! Team Jacob!), so about reading about THEM kinda sucks. BUt I want more so bad, I wouldn't be opposed to it. One request though..can we have some more cute Mercy/Adam moments? I just love em! Hope to read more soon!

You can't just end it here! We need to know who attacked mercy and why! And I'm all for the new story!

I love the chapter! And the qoutes, they were good. :) Thanks for the update. I hope you update Thursday but I'll understand if you don't (Christmas wrapping and everything, after all).

SnixX321

Oh my goodness! I came across this story by a chance and I'm so glad I did! Though this chapter had me in tears!

aww man that was intense! but i loved it! so worth the wait and totally looking forward for more

That was so sad! :'( so wonderfully written though! I think she should die, but then have uncle mike bring her back like Mary Joe was brought back. Then they can say that she did indeed die and the order was completed and the punishment fulfilled. Can't wait to read the next! Good luck with the computer!

julz. 3

OMG No mercy cant die

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I need to know what happens.

Omigosh...if you don't update soon...gosh...I cried. I did. Just a little. Your story is just...amazing. I love it. Update ASAP. Like. I really hope the next chapter will be up really soon! Please. For my sanity's sake...

:)

SnixX321

What... The Babies... What is going to happpen cant wait to find out

loved it please update soon

read it all today, I couldn't stop,very interesting