This was cute and I enjoy reading it very much. I hope you continue to write for Lilo and Stitch soon! :)

This was beautifully written and it's great the way you take the reader into the physical setting. Stitch is cute as a button and I love the peek into his mind at the end. I normally don't read much L&S but I stumbled onto this one and it's very good.

I'm sorry but I don't think you'll be getting very many reviews out of this fandom anymore; for what it's worth I really liked this story. Great writing, good emotion, nice characterizations, an overall wholesome story, and a good message. Really one of the best Lilo and Stitch stories post this year... but I guess that's not saying very much anymore.