The beginning was great, but what the hell? Mpreg? Are you crazy?

Better dont finish it dude...

Man this story is great. i love it. can't wait to read more

Me amazed. And to think, I never woulda found this wunnerful fic if I hadn't read 'when eyes meet eyes'... which is on the top three LotRfic list along with this ficcy... Anyway, please update (doesn't have to be soon) whenever you can because you are awesome. I think I sucked up enough so I got ta bye bye. -Spaz (You is my fanfic hero.) :)

OH MY LORD! please, please, i beg of you, look at the timeline in the books before you write these stories. the stewards ruled in gondor for many many many years before aragorn was ever born! please... it greatly bothers me.

-scream- You MUST update! I must admit, I'm a little issapointed that this has taken an mpreg turn, I never have liked them much. If you can pull it off, you'll be counted as a VERY good writer in my eyes indeed.

Just read through chapter 13. Oh, my favorite of all pairings, Glorfindel/Haldir. Rissan has me intrigued, such an evil elf, associating with Nazguls. I wonder, is he in league with Sauron? His powers are such that they almost equal those of Galadriel. I cannot wait to see what happens next, look forward to your next update.

Very good story, but where's the next chapter? I want the next chapter!

If you ever return to , you're going to have a SHIT LOAD of stories to update. Though I love most of the other stories too and will want you to update those quickly if you ever come back, I would be reviewing so much for you to update this story.
Though you haven't been on here for two years...lol. Damn you for making your own email account for ...now I can't bother you on your real email account. :-P
Oh well. I just had a thought...your fanfic inbox was probably full in 2003. lol. Well, just, return soon, :-D

good story please write another chapter

THIS IS MADDENING! Interesting concept - goes from lighthearted with dark overtones to really dark. Good use of characters. OK - so are you going to finish this soon - please do, I'm on tetherhooks.

write more you excelent write you!

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!

Sweet!

Great story. Bad guy was good too, cause he wasn't obviously evil at first. Suspicious with reason when you see it from his point, but then when we see the beast's thoughts then we know that he is the most likely candidate and evil.

Why would Galadriel and Celeborn invite one such as Rissan to remain in their realm? I mean, didn't Galadriel suspect something, since she seems to be able to read people...and not being able to read someone should have made her wonder.

I'm hoping it's Glorfindel's, just cause the baby would be prettier.

Will we get some backstory for Rissan? Is he Teleri or Noldor? One of the lone wanderers who never left Middle Earth, one of the Elves who fell under the thrall of Morgoth/Melkor and shunned by others of his race so became truly bittered and fey? Why does he want to kill Galadriel and Celeborn? Old grievance or just wants to take over a kingdom, but then he would have to destroy all those who would oppose him. Then the lights of Lorien would dim.

More please. Later

Wow... Amazing!A very well-written and enchanting story! The sparkle between

Haldir and Glorfindel is just right,

everything in this fic is right!

You are

a talented writer, and it's bad that you

don't have updated for a long time...

This is a very very good fic, and I think

many people wait for an end!

Great story. I can't wait till you get more up. I like it a lot, I like basically all you stories. Good job.

Legolover