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whatweareafreaidof 10/31/11 . chapter 1
how hard would it have been to have tim and mgee haveing fun in the elvator just talking to show how close theyare but no they only save that for tony.
alix33 10/30/11 . chapter 1
"Ziva looked up after a moment, her eyes revealing nothing. "Did you need something, McGee?" He screwed up his lips as he wracked his brain for the right words. "Did I do something to upset you? I mean, not that you seem mad at me, but you were really annoyed at me while we were stuck in the elevator, and I just thought . . ." Ziva shook her head and he let his words fade as he waited for her response. She was quiet for a few moments, then said, "Not everything is about you, McGee." She stared down at her desk for a few more seconds, then said, "Excuse me," before standing and walking away, toward the restrooms. McGee watched her walk away, his expression surprised," - I think I am even more surprised than Tim's expression, since "Not everything is about you" is a phrase I have never associated with Tim, but constantly with DiNozzo.
lsmcfan 10/28/11 . chapter 1
yeah, yeah-SURE yuou'r gonna finish "the Tower" :) All the waiting will just make me appreciate it more!

(and feel free to keep writing these one shots)

thanks
Lidil 10/28/11 . chapter 1
...why am I writing these random oneshots?...

Because you have stories that demand to be told.

Tell them.

We will listen.
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