|Reviews for One Time Herbert Held Dan With No Ulterior Motive|
| Sister-Puce 12/8/11 . chapter 1
herbert and dan have an undeniable connection.
we all know they feel for each is a good story,well is so cute.
| murasakiahiru 10/30/11 . chapter 1
Hi Murasaki ahiru here from Tumblr and LJ. Nice to see some new RA fanfic here. Great story as usual you write excellent stuff. Gees even when he's upset Dan thinks with the 'little' head. Nice to see Herbert more human but still keeping him as we love him