 KazuSakai 2/13/12 . chapter 1I've already seen this idea: having a crossover from the two persona games, but this one seems strange. Maybe it is the idea that many members of SEES already graduated from high school by the time the Investigation Team was founded. Please make up a reason why some of the graduated members of SEES are acting like they didn't graduated from high school. ANYWAY, nice story and i would like to see more of it. And by the way, I'm already at Chapter 5 but i choose to review at Chapter 1. Thanks and update soon.. |
 XoreandoX 12/21/11 . chapter 4I just started reading your story, and I have to admit that you've written quite a good story thus far, though I would suggest getting a beta to correct some of the mix ups between Minako/Minato and the he/she errors that come up every now and again, still the story as a whole is fairly good and I look forward to seeing more soon, so until then Keep on Writing. |
 CrAzY-SiLLy-Me 12/9/11 . chapter 4What I liked about this would be putting both MCs from P3 and making a cross-over with P4, plus Shinji's alive! XD
And I pretty much enjoyed the idea and how the plot is going far; actually looking forward to the upcoming chapters. :D
And while I am also worrying over the pairings/couples, I'm sure I'll still read this one whatever you decide on - it's Persona after all, and it's an awesome fic in my book :D |
 Smallbell 12/7/11 . chapter 4Great story! Though it kinda threw me, cuz I played P3 on the PS2 with the choice of only the guy. And you played the PSP version. But great writing, sound plot, and fun story. Your battle scenes are kinda confusing, but it doesn't matter too much with the battles. I'm a little worried you may get lost with so many character, but you seam to be doing well. Keep up the good work. |
 EmoGhost1995 12/6/11 . chapter 4YES! I LOVED THIS CHAP! UPDATE |
 pokemon56476 12/5/11 . chapter 4Woooooooh! I thought you were dead. More importantly, this fic. No offence. Well, there's a large cliffhanger. Kinda. It's pretty understandable why there are shadow version of Izanagi and the others. They pretty much came from shadows. Actually, scratch that. They DID come from shadows. Nyeh. |
 Kairi26 12/5/11 . chapter 4awesome chapter. please update soon. Couple pairings? Yay! f.w.i. I'm in luv with Aki and Minako. but any couple paring is good. |
 wisarute7 12/5/11 . chapter 4wow it's pretty long and Ryoji! please let it be him please
good work keep going :) |
 SunFlor 11/6/11 . chapter 3 Hello There! Wooow, Your story is amazing! I really love the way it is write. I think the characters are prety faithful to their personalities.
I will be waitingo for the next chapter. Please continue soon! |
 Yu-chan00 11/4/11 . chapter 3 Hmm..not bad! I enjoyed it...however there's some lacking detail from Souji's story...something about their final enemy which was Izanami...but not that it matters so much...there wasn't that much OOcness...they all seemed to be in character for me. Great job on this chapter! Nice! Keep it up! Your readers will be waiting! |
 cutting-throat17 11/3/11 . chapter 3Another great chapter! I love how you keep everyone in character. It's really well done. I love the part where the guys have breakfast (Classic) I can't believe Teddie said that. Haha |
 pokemon56476 11/3/11 . chapter 3! So. Awesome! My favorite shorter persona fic. |
 PP34 10/31/11 . chapter 2 Nice chapter although it was a little short...can't wait for the next one...! I'm excited to find out what'll happen now that the two groups met... |
 cutting-throat17 10/31/11 . chapter 2Another great chapter! I found it interesting and awesome that Souji would protect Minako from the shadows and I found it funny how he stopped Minako from using her evoker. Haha. I understand how you feel about not writing each Persona's skill and move. There so many, it's overwhelming to remember them all. Also, your very lucky to have vacation. *sniffle* I only get holidays off. Good Luck on your next chapter. |
 anon 10/31/11 . chapter 2 Please continue...nuff said |