Oh... D:

Theta. D: *huggles him* I loved this. It was devestating though. SO devestating. D:

Poor Theta. :( :'(

Actually nearly cried. (U)

You are brilliant on Theta Koshei anguish. I like the way you made him ramble on and on very Doctor like. But it would really been so much more completed if you had put the breaks with the writing process in. Still a beautiful and sad piece though.

Yeah. I liked it. A lot. As usual.

I liked how it rambled just enough to make it seem like the Doctor (his thought process is kind of like a tangled ball of string), and I think you captured it perfectly.

However, I can't help but say that you're third person writing is stronger than your first person. It's good, but I think the idea could have been pulled off better in third (like, you could break up the letter with little sections of how he's feeling as he's writing it). I liked it!

Good job!