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Domina Trixie
2003-01-08
ch 14,
abuseMy God. You couldn't rock my world more if you were a frickin' World Rocker. Oh God. Shifty little Lareby - that weasel. And the ring! Sigh. And the fire! Perfect touch. I adore Diana. Just adore her. Can't wait for the sequelage. This fic! I lurve it! You are so awesome. I'm in awe. In awe.
Domina Trixie
2003-01-08
ch 12,
abuseGirl! I honest-to-god jumped when Patrick came back. I just did NOT expect that... Wow.
Domina Trixie
2003-01-08
ch 8,
abuse“Tell me now,” he said quietly. *thud*

Dude, your Michael Vaughn makes me swoon. That's never happened before.
Domina Trixie
2003-01-08
ch 6,
abuse“Grad school. So, what’s the new love of your life’s name? Trixie?”

If I didn't love you, I'd say that hurt my feelings. ;)

Jenai - this is fantastic! I just adore Diana - and God help me, she makes me like Vaughn. What have you done?
Diana3
2003-01-08
ch 14,
abuseOooooooh.

Jenai, lovely job. I want to say I'm glad to get closure, even if it's Evil!Closure. Lovely ending, I must say. Leaves me wondering. I like it.

Thanks for the wild ride, by the way :)
Mai1
2003-01-05
ch 14,
abuseArggh! Arggh! Oh no, no, you can't do this to us! No, no, no... See, this isn't finished. can't be finished. You need to write more. More and more and more. I need to know what happens to her and she needs to come back, or Michael needs to save her, or... Arggh! Jenai!!!! Help!

:)
laras-dice
2003-01-04
ch 14,
abuseJenai,

I can't believe this is over. Wow. I remember way back when on Server 5 talking with you about gunshots hitting bricks. Hee.

True to form, you twisted and turned right up until the end. The last chapter had great action and suspense, and I like that things were left open in the epilogue.

Sob. Poor Diana. If that's it for her, I'm gonna miss her. Either way, congrats on finishing. It's been a great ride.

-Lara
auroraskyes
2003-01-04
ch 14,
abusewow. that was freakin' awesome! is that the end? i like it. its not like an all resolved happy end type. really good. cant wait for ur next story! keep up the great work.
icyfire
2003-01-03
ch 13,
abuseJenai, I can't believe this fic is finished. I remember when it was nothing more than a twinkle in your eye. We barely knew one another, and I can't remember now if I volunteered or if you asked me to beta it, but either way thank you for letting me be a part of the journey.

It's been wonderful watching Diana grow and expand. The different direction the fic swerved to took my breath away, but I loved the ending.

Sad to see it come to a close but happy too,

Robin
Rach
2002-12-09
ch 12, anon.
abuseNice twist there, Jenai. Yet another good chapter. :)
vanila
2002-12-08
ch 12,
abuseYOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING! OMG this is amazing, the action scenes are super! Mad props to you.
Diana
2002-12-08
ch 12, anon.
abuseDum dum DUM! Oh, Jenai, more please. I'm now more anticipant than I was before. Gotta love your cliffhangers ;)
icyfire
2002-12-08
ch 12,
abuseJenai,

Thank you for letting me beta this story. It's been a wonderful experience for me. :)

I've been waiting anxiously for his return--since I've always known he would one day appear. Now I'm anxiously awaiting to read everything else you have planned. Whoo!

Robin
laras-dice
2002-12-08
ch 12,
abuseI am so behind on my reviews. What better place to start catching up than this fic. I missed Recoil. :-)

What I really like about this chapter, and the entire fic, is the way you keep twisting and turning things. Just when I think I know what's going on, it unravels a little more, and it turns out I didn't have a clue.

The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter? Killer. I can't wait to see how you wrap things up.

-Lara (who feels so much better now that she's had a much-needed VEX fix)
Celli
2002-12-08
ch 12,
abuseeeep! eep! Did I mention eep?

*chews on nails*
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