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| Domina Trixie 2003-01-08 ch 14, | abuseMy God. You couldn't rock my world more if you were a frickin' World Rocker. Oh God. Shifty little Lareby - that weasel. And the ring! Sigh. And the fire! Perfect touch. I adore Diana. Just adore her. Can't wait for the sequelage. This fic! I lurve it! You are so awesome. I'm in awe. In awe. |
| Domina Trixie 2003-01-08 ch 12, | abuseGirl! I honest-to-god jumped when Patrick came back. I just did NOT expect that... Wow. |
| Domina Trixie 2003-01-08 ch 8, | abuse“Tell me now,” he said quietly. *thud* Dude, your Michael Vaughn makes me swoon. That's never happened before. |
| Domina Trixie 2003-01-08 ch 6, | abuse“Grad school. So, what’s the new love of your life’s name? Trixie?” If I didn't love you, I'd say that hurt my feelings. ;) Jenai - this is fantastic! I just adore Diana - and God help me, she makes me like Vaughn. What have you done? |
| Diana3 2003-01-08 ch 14, | abuseOooooooh. Jenai, lovely job. I want to say I'm glad to get closure, even if it's Evil!Closure. Lovely ending, I must say. Leaves me wondering. I like it. Thanks for the wild ride, by the way :) |
| Mai1 2003-01-05 ch 14, | abuseArggh! Arggh! Oh no, no, you can't do this to us! No, no, no... See, this isn't finished. can't be finished. You need to write more. More and more and more. I need to know what happens to her and she needs to come back, or Michael needs to save her, or... Arggh! Jenai!!!! Help! :) |
| laras-dice 2003-01-04 ch 14, | abuseJenai, I can't believe this is over. Wow. I remember way back when on Server 5 talking with you about gunshots hitting bricks. Hee. True to form, you twisted and turned right up until the end. The last chapter had great action and suspense, and I like that things were left open in the epilogue. Sob. Poor Diana. If that's it for her, I'm gonna miss her. Either way, congrats on finishing. It's been a great ride. -Lara |
| auroraskyes 2003-01-04 ch 14, | abusewow. that was freakin' awesome! is that the end? i like it. its not like an all resolved happy end type. really good. cant wait for ur next story! keep up the great work. |
| icyfire 2003-01-03 ch 13, | abuseJenai, I can't believe this fic is finished. I remember when it was nothing more than a twinkle in your eye. We barely knew one another, and I can't remember now if I volunteered or if you asked me to beta it, but either way thank you for letting me be a part of the journey. It's been wonderful watching Diana grow and expand. The different direction the fic swerved to took my breath away, but I loved the ending. Sad to see it come to a close but happy too, Robin |
| Rach 2002-12-09 ch 12, anon. | abuseNice twist there, Jenai. Yet another good chapter. :) |
| vanila 2002-12-08 ch 12, | abuseYOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING! OMG this is amazing, the action scenes are super! Mad props to you. |
| Diana 2002-12-08 ch 12, anon. | abuseDum dum DUM! Oh, Jenai, more please. I'm now more anticipant than I was before. Gotta love your cliffhangers ;) |
| icyfire 2002-12-08 ch 12, | abuseJenai, Thank you for letting me beta this story. It's been a wonderful experience for me. :) I've been waiting anxiously for his return--since I've always known he would one day appear. Now I'm anxiously awaiting to read everything else you have planned. Whoo! Robin |
| laras-dice 2002-12-08 ch 12, | abuseI am so behind on my reviews. What better place to start catching up than this fic. I missed Recoil. :-) What I really like about this chapter, and the entire fic, is the way you keep twisting and turning things. Just when I think I know what's going on, it unravels a little more, and it turns out I didn't have a clue. The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter? Killer. I can't wait to see how you wrap things up. -Lara (who feels so much better now that she's had a much-needed VEX fix) |
| Celli 2002-12-08 ch 12, | abuseeeep! eep! Did I mention eep? *chews on nails* |