Always a thrill to see what you do with your characters. Your writing is the most true to life. Excited to see where you take the characters in the story.

On bad days, I re-read something of yours, and it works every time.

Hope you're doing well and to hear from you soon.

Thanks!

This story is so fascinating!

Eager for more...

- Raum from Italy

Wonderful chapter.

The conversation Tanya-Bella-Edward was my favorite part.

Many, many questions!

- Raum

There's been a lot of progressing in this chapter.

I'm really involved in this story; I do hope that its hiatus will end and you'll complete it!

- Raum from Italy

Everybody lies.

Bella lies.

- Raum

I'm so intrigued!

But there should be a vamp to take care of that idiot Mike Newton.

- Raum

Wow...

I have to be very careful when I read your chapters. I get distracted for a moment and...bang...someone's dead.

- Raum

good chapter!

- Raum

Intriguing!

- Raum

First of all, I'm a huge fan of House, MD

Second. I love your writing style!

Third. This chapter was delicious.

Fourth. I hope I'm not making a big mistake reading a story which is in "temporary hiatus."

- Raum

I think you've done a good job on the confusion angle. I'm not sure what's going on anymore. Maybe it'll all get straightened out soon.

Love this line:

"I can only turn my head, seeking out his eyes and finding them. Finding the truth. Game over. Game so over."

I had to laugh at your revelation because Im often confused by you in other stories too. Haha. But the lies don't seem too be piling up too much here or maybe Ive just read the chapter over the course of too many hours.

Phil is going to go hunting with my dad. That should end well.

BWAH! K, you finally got me. I had to stop reading and review. I know, I suck...

Sleepy Edward...thank you for that.

Whoooakay. (That was supposed to be "okay" with "whoa" in front of it.) I'm sure you don't care (I wouldn't), but yes, I'm here because I freaking loved MWE, and when you wrote that last chapter, I had the arrogance to forgive you for daring to not finish a fic you were writing and offering up to us slobs, free of charge. That was a damn good last chapter, and actually wrapped things up, which shocked the hell out of me. I remember reading another fic that was abruptly concluded not nearly as well (cough wing man cough), so I REALLY appreciate the obvious effort you took to do it right. Thank you.

But on to this one...I am an angst hoor. If I didn't know it before, the amount I flove this fic confirms it.

What the hell is with Alice? She's got something going on, and I don't want to be flip about [insert learning disability/diagnosable mental disorder here] but damn. She's not the perky fashionista to which we are all accustomed.

Well, crap. Damn you for being such a compelling writer! *shakes fist halfheartedly*

May your muse be ever with you. *makes sign of the cross, or something*

I guess whatever the lies are I'll be surprised cuz I've got nothin. Everything about this is great! Wish I had the patience to wait to read til complete. I keep thinking im lost and have to read the last chapter every update. but yet Im never actually lost you just make me feel like I am.