| Reviews for Veela heart |
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Phoenix414 11/22/12 . chapter 12Thanks for letting us know...I'm sure I'm not the only one who is waiting patiently for your next updates. |
MellyReader 11/22/12 . chapter 12This is a good story! However, it's driving me mad when you turn "mine" into a plural possessive pronoun (i.e. mines or mine's). It's not a word unless you are looking for the digging in underground tunnel form of Mine. Try replacing with I, me, our, my, or simply mine. |
xB2UTY 11/22/12 . chapter 9I'm not sure if you're aware of this but you used the word 'porncorn' in this chapter when you probably meant 'popcorn'. While I did find it highly amusing, I think it'd be best to change it. Anyways, aside from that I am thoroughly enjoying your story so far. My absolute favorite parts are when Harry's mothering Draco, it's so adorable. There's just something so heartwarming and fuzzy about Harry becoming an overprotective mother hen to Draco that just makes me want to squeal. Well, I'm going to continue reading. Keep up the good work |
Fay02 11/22/12 . chapter 12Hi, I hope all goes well with your move. |
Infernal Rose 11/20/12 . chapter 11I love love love your Lucius/Harry stories, and your other stories that I've read as well. Please update quickly! |
ChargerWarrior 11/18/12 . chapter 11Oh this is a wonderful story! I cant wait to see who Severus is going to end up with! I would like to take a stab and say Auther and Severus will be together. I think that would be hot hehehe. Though I could see Sev being the sub in that relationship. But hey not my story, just a suggestion! Can't wait for the update! |
Bethany 11/17/12 . chapter 11 Update please I love this fic, you've converted me to this pairing and veela! |
Lou 11/10/12 . chapter 11 Thank you for the update! Sorry if it took me awhile to review. I'm behind in my reading. This was great! |
Konohana-chan 11/10/12 . chapter 11Oh! Your fanfic is simply fabulous! I do not even know what to say right, she's amazing * - * I do not usually comment on fanfics that are in another language, such as yours, but I just could not pass up! Please tell me it will not take the post! I'm climbing the walls I'm so excited for the sequel. Personally, I hope that Ginny has a horrible end (never liked that redhead unsalted! ò.ó) |
KLS-Blueskies 11/8/12 . chapter 11I LOVE THIS FIC it is SOOOOOOOO Great keep up the good work ;D |
Erudessa-gabrielle 11/7/12 . chapter 11I NEED MORE! |
Gracealma 11/4/12 . chapter 11Good chapter. I think Dean/Pansy would work together. I think Ron should have a partner too. Get him our of Ginny and Hermoine's hands and other body parts. |
cuteknight101 11/3/12 . chapter 11I wanna see Harry mothering Severus! |
Rosepraul 11/1/12 . chapter 11I think Severus and Arthur should get together. And i was so excited when i saw you had updated on my birthday! XD thank you so much i eagerly await the next update. though i might have to control my impatient tendacies. |
boiled eggs 10/31/12 . chapter 11ahhh please update again soon! ooo btw...is Blaise going to get together with Percy? they're both all alone ;_; also, Seamus/Ron is surprisingly cute :) |