I envy your writing. There's something polished and extremely intelligent about it that I can't quite put my finger on quite yet, but it's brilliant. Wow. How do you come up with these plotlines? They're impressively intricate for fan fictions...or maybe because it's been a while since I've read a fan fiction that isn't based around a teenage-esque romance, haha.

When I got to the part where we get Laura's name for the first time, I literally breathed out loud, "Oh, my gosh." Brilliantly perfect, the way you set that up. So sophisticated. Oh, my.

I envy how well and how intelligently you write your dialogue. It could be placed word-for-word in the actual "Alias" show, and it wouldn't sound juvenile or young or out-of-place at all. Oh, my. I am in awe.

I really enjoyed your story. I especially liked the back story of Jack and Irina. Just a couple of small things. In the US, it's Girl Scouts, not Girl Guides, and curb instead of kerb.