A great story. Very good.

For the love of god...
Next time you have a semi-humourous thought, why not email it to your friends and don't waste server space by turning it into a story and subjecting the rest of us to it. Your story sucks, you've never heard of Canon, your blatant Mary-Sue (a mary sue is inserting yourself or an "avatar" of yourself in a story) is annoying as is your celebrity inserts as well.
Don't give up your day job, and furthermore, try writing something that other people besides you and your little friends find funny. Loser.

Hi... i really don't think that it's funny that neo is not the one. keep trying, bye

Sorry but I didn't like this fanfic. I only read to where her friends came and stopped reading it there. Whatever you do stick to your day job. Better luck next time.

I don't think it was that bad :]

i was a mary sue. may everyone forgive me.

I'm sorry,but even though it was an interesting story, I just didn't like it that much. Sorry, better luck next time.

LOL, even though I skipped through most of it.

It's pretty cool. I didn't get to finish it all...yet.

whoa.. ehhh that was...

interesting!

I already made a review on here but oh well.

I liked the part about windows 3000. . . . . . .I think I forgot to mention that.

I haven't finished this yet, but I have been lmao! This has got to be the funniest one, so far!

Um, This is not worth it one bit.

"Supposedly." I couldn't even finish this one.

Not only is this NOT funny, you need to work on your formatting. One big chuck of words are hard to read. If there was a zero rating on here that's what you'd get. As it is, a one is I have to give.

Rewrite, NOW!