Omg... I'm tearing up! That was amazing!

My only problem with this story is that I kept expecting to find out what this/these mysterious trangression/s of Edward's were that made Bella and her dad so mad at him...

What was bad enough that it made her leave him, she kept saying he wouldn't "change"..

?

amaaazing ! 3

I'm glad they are going to try again!

Thanks for entering the contest.

Well done and good luck!

Kathie

Awhhsss! I actually teared up on this one! How sweet the way the got together & sad that they split up.. Im so glad theyre gonna try again!.

I really liked this story and was rooting for them the whole way through! I did find it ended a little too abruptly, though. Good luck with the contest :)

Why was she leaving I didn't quite catch that?

I'm a little confused about what tore them apart, but that was a great snapshot of high school! Nicely done!

Loved it. Will you be continuing this story?