Loving the story, hating the lack of updates.

Okay, this story is awesome. very good plot and original ideas tossed in. i like it and hope it gets an update soon.

cant wait for the next chapter.

It has been awhile so I had to reread my fav cross over I really hope to read some new chapters soon

I like this story. Very much in fact. It would please me tremendously for you to finish this story. Please update soon if you can. I look forward to the next chapter. If you need help with proofing your writing, just lemme know and I will be glad to help you in any way I can.

Yourvstory is awesome but i was hoping if you could bring back kirabi and hachibi and kyuubi

wonder if naruto will ever be able to bust out the rasenshuriken

The story is great :)) make more chapters,put Rasenshuriken in game :DD and maiby something similar to Flying thunder god skill...And finaly Naruto and Mirajane first kiss xD

Hi, me again, I just remembered another idea I had: have naruto be able to redirect magic attacks of an element that is more that …% energy (fire, lightning etc.) maybe even etherion or jupiter cannon blasts. Like only slightly though. He uses ethernano so why not? Also please, if you use the puppet idea, let him keep corpses to use. Not kill, but if people die when fighting against him. I dunno, I like it, you may not. But I digress.

This is a really good story. I have just some questions though. Will Naruto be able to use pure chakra, in his world, attacks by changing them into Ethernano? If so he could use Jūken, puppetry, medical ninjūtsu and so on. This would be an interesting idea, no? I have no doubt that others have suggested the same thing but I just felt like I should say. Btw, love the story. Update soon.

I'm loving your story so far. But I'd be careful when you write about Tartaros. If nothing is known about it in cannon then Mashima-sensei definetily has plans for it. He has proven a few times that he's planned his story far in advance. I would recommend something that leads to potential hints about Tartraos and what exactly is going on but with little to no solid evidence to support the claims. This way you leave yourself open to being able to adapt to whatever Mashima-sensei decides to do in the future. I guess just be careful not to write yourself into a corner.

I look forward to the next chapter! (I hope you plan to continue the story. Its been a while since you've updated)

Loving this story. Update ASAP. . . please?

Ah I like the story so far. :D Cant wait till the next chapter. I was wondering if Naruto was going to do moves that rookie nine had or maybe like Kakashi's chidori?

nice chapter.

so much crap happened at once in your story.