This is an incredibly well done story. It shows more maturity and dedication than the vast majority of fanfic's out there. You did a brilliant job with the pacing and story development, and while it could use a little more polishing, anyone who reads it can tell that hours upon hours of love and talent were poured into it. Grats!

you are truly an artist. i'm not sure who i like best for akito, but you wrote a great story. keep it up! _

OH MY GOD! U JUST ANSWERED MY PRAYERS FROM THIS STORY! I JUST LOVE THE AKITO/RYOKO LOVE PLOT! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT U HAD NEXT! THANX!

I believe someone else has already said that you're a beautiful, evil bastard. Anyway. This fic made me hate Yurika just that much more, but it really stabilized the Ruri-Ryoko relationship. You don't get that in the series. Out of the three, this is my favorite.

Nadeisco's Ryoko always seemed to be of the four girls who pined after Akito, the dark horse. This is why I had loved this story line. Thank god you did put the next part up cause I would have been very pissed in the way this ended!

Hope to read more of your stories.

Why don't you try a "Love Hina" or "Tenchi Muyo" Story line. Two more fantastic series to write about.

Plus of course more Nadeisco stories!

dennisud

Wonderful! I've always liked that Akito-Ryoko love-angle. I hate Yurika and that Akito-chasing bleccchs.

Just one thing: Do you have a cooy of the PSX game "Nadesico: The Void of Three Years"? THe game is extrememly hard to find esp. if one doesn't have the resources.

Love this, love this, love this, love this!

AAAAAAAHHHHH! You beautiful, evil bastard! How could you do it! you're not a man, you're a monster! Granted, a talented monster, but still! There are appearances to keep, for godssakes!

UNDO IT! I beg of YOU!

Ahh , certainly one of the rare good nadesico fics. My only wish is that you give Ruri a fighting chance in the next sequel , if youre coming up with one. The final line she spoke before the credits kick in at the end of the movie drives me insane. Akito and Ruri forever!

Damn...this was very good, not enough well written nadesico fics out there. I would greatly care to read more!

What can I say? Very good job on a fic. You put me on a really good reader's high then a nice spiral onto the angst...eesh.

I know it's a stupd question but I still have to ask:

"Are you going to write a sequel to this?"

Hmmm, also Kudos on the Ruri angle, man she was so cute in that talent show...

Again, very good. This story actually can serve to explain a lot about the movie, particularly why some characters act the way they do. I would love to see a sequel. There is not enough fanfiction of this caliber out there.

Wow, this, and the story before it, kick ass. 'Course, I've always been a big Ryoko fan, but the story is still very good. Is there going to be a sequel? Akito was alive in the Nadesico movie, wasn't he?

-Padfoot

Well now, I must say that this one was both darker and happier all in one neat little package! Though it was a little confusing, Akito and Yurika really don't DIE do they. (It would've been one hell of a short movie if they had most likely.) Looking forward to the next one! Keep it up!

Oh you did continue, you had better not quit here, that was a very meen thing that you did to poor Ryoko, there just has to be more. Please continue. Ja-ne (_)