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YuffeGetsBears 11/21/11 . chapter 1
That was very amusing D

If I were Hermione I would have killed them for being in the room.. Haha Fleur.. so sneaky :D
Zelda's Hero 11/4/11 . chapter 1
I love Fleur but I would probably have to kill her if she did that to me. I mean really, taking Hermione into the boy's room so they could watch. I think I would be having some trust problems when it came to Fleur right now!
Roselia Rose 11/4/11 . chapter 1
I love your stories, did you change anything to them or just a re-uploading them?

I never read this one before, but my favorite line was: "I see your Fleur and raise you a Ron."

I don't know why, but the image in my head was hilarious when I saw an indignant Ron being stuck on the table.
Your Anonymous 10/31/11 . chapter 1
I am so happy you re-posted this! This is my favorite story by you.

In many Hermione x Fleur stories I read the characters are so different, like the authors have to change who they are just to make the relationship work.

But you- you capture Hermione's stubborn, naive attitude and match it perfectly with Fleur's natural coquettish-ness, without having to make Hermione a mushy love-sick puppy.

And not only that, but your writing style and diction is amazing! I won't go into the intricacies of it all, but it is a pleasure to read something so different and well-planned.

Honestly, my favorite part is when Fleur is teasing Hermione in the bedroom, because it is fun to see Hermione come undone without her losing her empirical character.

The poker game, the bedroom scene, the twist at the end... every part is incredibly good. I'll be reading this again :)
Eryk Lestrange 10/30/11 . chapter 1
you couldn't break this up into chapters?
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