 Roselia Rose 11/4/11 . chapter 1I love your stories, did you change anything to them or just a re-uploading them?
I never read this one before, but my favorite line was: "I see your Fleur and raise you a Ron."
I don't know why, but the image in my head was hilarious when I saw an indignant Ron being stuck on the table. |
 Your Anonymous 10/31/11 . chapter 1I am so happy you re-posted this! This is my favorite story by you.
In many Hermione x Fleur stories I read the characters are so different, like the authors have to change who they are just to make the relationship work.
But you- you capture Hermione's stubborn, naive attitude and match it perfectly with Fleur's natural coquettish-ness, without having to make Hermione a mushy love-sick puppy.
And not only that, but your writing style and diction is amazing! I won't go into the intricacies of it all, but it is a pleasure to read something so different and well-planned.
Honestly, my favorite part is when Fleur is teasing Hermione in the bedroom, because it is fun to see Hermione come undone without her losing her empirical character.
The poker game, the bedroom scene, the twist at the end... every part is incredibly good. I'll be reading this again :) |