quite odd, indeed quite odd. i had a hard time with it but, o well ill catch up

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Hilarious. I like your English teacher already! I wish my english teacher would let me right about a day as my favorite hero. HAHAHAHAHAHA! Poor Lina. You took her shirt.

lol, this story rocked! I'm assuming the brown haired girl was you? hehe...

but anywho! I wish you could have made their adventures even longer and perhaps have the "fake" lina and Xellos hit it off and then the "fake" Jamie start something with anythony? lol, just wished it could have lasted longer!

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Lol! Poor Lina, lacking a shirt. she can probably borrow Amelia's extra?

ahh! you STOLE LINA'S SHIRT? Lol

oh noo! The suspence! I must go to the next chapter to find out what happened to Lina! And Xelloss is so creepy..

"What floats his boat would sink another's while in harbor."

Oh, I love that!

Lol, I'm lovin this story!

Ouu! I liked your second chapter! Lol! Poor Lina, so confused! I will read more now!

CAN YOU PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE YOUR CHILD OF MINE STORY...IT'S REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GOOD AND I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN AND IF SNAPE MAKES IT UP TO HARRY FOR HURTING HIS FEELINGS :(

PLEASE UPDATE, I HAVE BEEN READING THIS STORY FAITHFULLY EVERY CHANCE I GET ALTHOUGH B/C OF SCHOOL AND WORK, IT'S NOT AS OFTEN AS I WOULD LIKE, BUT YOUR STORY IS THE FIRST ONE I SEARCH FOR AND READ EVERYTIME I DO GET ON FFN

I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY!

Lol! I wasn't quite expecting this when I read it. you should continue it. I think it'd be a cool adventure to go on- trying to get Lina back and get you back to where you're supposed to be. hehe. Awsome story!

HELL YEAH! write the next chapter! write the next chapter!...i mean, FINISH THE STORY! FINISH THE STORY! !

You have got to continue this. The suspense I can't take it. Very well written.

MORE! WRITE MORE! :) I like it!

How did it happen? Continue!

do more please.