Great job with this! I loved Rossi's quick thinking and JJ's frustration at being on the outside looking in.

This was so much fun to read, you have the characters spot on and the story line was awesome!

I love the way JJ reaches for her gun after hearing the shot only to realize it's just her phone. Plus, I do love JJ and Rossi together and the hospital scene was sweet.

I am looking forward to reading more of your stories!

This was greeat - really original for the challenge. Well done

That's really wonderful so far! I hope this wasn't just a one-shot, too good to leave it at one chapter!

I'm pretty sure this is the first JJ / Rossi I've read and it's an interesting pairing.

I like Henry trying to fly in his Big Bird costume. It's always fun how kids think after putting a costume on.

Wow! This took my breath away! Amazing! I hope you write more for this couple soon!

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