|Reviews for Nails|
| Yaoi lover 5/23/13 . chapter 33
Kotomine is one of the smexiest male in Fate ( actually almost all males in fate are smexy even zouken when he was young and not a bag of worms) There are so many possiblilies to yaoi him up with anyone. Yet he is always touched in the head. Sigh sexy villains are better than fugly ones...
Fight on Shiro Rin ganbare! Beat that smexy devil.
| Guest 5/23/13 . chapter 33
Hope it's not the end ...
1) she becomes a true magician I mean the endless possibles realities she viewed would make her... Like Edward Alreic from Full metal Alchemist (when Ed viewed Truth and understood magical formulas )/ like Berenkrnstal/Rika became powerful after experienceinf endless realities in UminekoHigurashiseries/ like how kururu understood things at the end of the series in Air Gear.
2) someone is gonna smash time/spacr/reality and save her just like Gasai Yuuno did in Mirai Nikkii to Yuki. Lover boy kyaaa
3) Zeltretch. Yea one name explains all. trolollo of the Fate series
4) wished back via Grail power ? Heavens feel? Like what how Goku does in Dragon Ball.
5) gets back when summoned like caster did and pops back into timeline .
Please happy ending wanna see more moe Rin x shiro
| Guest 5/23/13 . chapter 20
Lol nice one Rin. Berserker funny hahahaa
I thought shed recognize her though. I mean their family alliance in the same city both heirs... ? Maybe she lost her memories?
| Guest 5/23/13 . chapter 17
Loved that bottom paragraph on this chapter.
| Impstar 5/21/13 . chapter 33
Is this the ending? A "we're stuck in a time loop" story? Dang, in my personal opinion is that this ending is only slightly better than "it was just a dream". Endings where nothing has changed from the beginning annoy me. Unless this isn't the ending, in which case I'm eager to see what you come up with. The story doesn't say completed, so I have hope.
| Nemrut 5/16/13 . chapter 32
Fascinating story, really well done with the new servants and the mystery about their identities. Caster especially seems to be incredibly strong and likable.
Like this new re-imagining, although, don't quite understand why this had to be relocated to Spain since it didn't really seem to impact the story as of now, could have just as well happened in Fuyuki city, unless I missed something.
Nevertheless, good take on Rin and the rest of the characters, thank you for sharing this
| Lamon 5/9/13 . chapter 32
What an utterly awesome story...
Totally original but so full of tragedy..
I can't help but think this will all end in tears..
| Eternity Wind 5/6/13 . chapter 32
That was cute lol
| Jade 4/20/13 . chapter 31
I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad it's finally very official that Rin and Shirou are together. Great fic looking forward to more! Keep it up!
| Guest 3/29/13 . chapter 30
I stayed up all night to read all of this. XD
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 25
Ahahaha rin was priceless.
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 22
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 12
The mystery of Shirou is too great. I want to know what he is capable of. T.T
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 8
I like this Rin. Unlike in the VN and some other stories, shes compassioniate and mature; not as prone to hittinh people.
| Guest 3/28/13 . chapter 3
XD Shirou you asshole.