|Reviews for Teddy Bear Memories|
| Tact what's that 8/13/12 . chapter 8
Honestly, I don't get why people jump off of because it is trying to keep it clean on this sight.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but don't they have a sister site called "adult ?"
I get trying to separate the two 'cause we've got tweenies posting on . We know they're reading.
They're trying to cover their own asses because people are too sensitive anymore. "I'm not paying attention to what my children do. It's your fault they're into porn/drugs/violence!"
It particularly annoys me when a fic is being taken off of due to the adult situations and there is no adult situations yet to be seen!
Besides, if they were truly enforcing the adult themes shtick then I would not have just read 5 different sex scenes in 5 different fics in the past 3 days. And i don't even look for that crap! (it's not my cup of tea, but eh, sometimes it is important to the story).
I realize that this should probably be a PM, but I don't care. The review box is right here and you were the one to set precedence by stating why you were no longer posting in a separate chapter.
Now that I'm done ranting about that, let me tell you what I think of your story.
The writing is okay, the plot seems a little forced, and it's really obvious you want Harry and Quatre to get together. Your writing is biased. Now mind you, all writing is biased, but the truly great stories and fics, the bias is subtle.
You might want to work on that. Otherwise you just keep falling into cliche p(l)otholes.
Basically, your story isn't good enough for me to chase over the internet but if I notice it updated here I might take another look.
Now I know I could have been kinder in my review, but I don't feel like it. Hopefully you'll take the criticism constructively, as it is intended, no matter how brashly it is delivered.
| Someone's Ghost 6/17/12 . chapter 8
I understand and respect why you are doing this, but if you don't take this account down entirely, could you post little chapters that say "I updated this story again..." and maybe "here is the link: " I read because it has the easiest way to keep track of the stories I read that are in progress. That all the authors I like are being forced to move is driving me crazy. Just think about it.
| taryn kenobi 6/9/12 . chapter 8
Can I have your tumblr please ?
| ShiroSakuraTenshi 6/9/12 . chapter 8
Please send me the website for your fanfiction
| NamidaNoNozomi 6/9/12 . chapter 8
If you could email me the sites you will be postting on it would be nice. If you have the time please email at SilveryDeep . I understand if you don't have the time; thank you either way.
| Guest 6/8/12 . chapter 8
Umm... You might want to take down chapter 8 now because I don't think there are many problems with that anymore. And as long as you state a disclaimer saying you don't own anything that anyone else recignizes to your own knowledge you can still write. And please tell me you are going to keep posting soon I have been waitig since January for you to post the next chapter
| saphire-kitsune 6/7/12 . chapter 8
thanks for the warning and What! destroy fanfiction what about peoples rights and freedom of speech this doesnt undermine the copyright agreement in anyway thanks to the disclaimer and why! stupid government always out there to ruin a good thing uhgg! sorry for mispell anyway serioursly thanks for the warning and thats stupid what about all the fanfic sights they are legal no matter what anyone else says how else are we to express our creativity
| santanaann 6/7/12 . chapter 8
santanaann at yahoo dot com
| hi 6/7/12 . chapter 8
Hey! Your story is awesome, and i'd really hate it if the site was deleted. My e-mail is belle _ pieuvre yahoo . com. please send your story if the site is deleted!
| CrzyFreek09 6/7/12 . chapter 8
here i my email... i really hope this act does not pass...
| Dark Fairy 6/7/12 . chapter 8
heres my email just incase
| Ikidori 6/7/12 . chapter 8
My email is jenchen37
| kezzakerri 6/7/12 . chapter 8
i cant wait for the next chapter i really like this story and cant wait to see what havoc the newly discovered twins will do
| storylistener 6/7/12 . chapter 9
I agree this is important but couldn't you be nice to your loyal readers and at least put a chapter up too? This is just dissappointing.
| Cyn Finnegan 6/7/12 . chapter 9
I've posted a companion petition on Change Dot Org, asking FFDotNet to offer an MA rating with appropriate filtering. You can find it here: www. change petitions/fanfiction-net-please-offer-writers-a-ma ture-audiences-rating-with-appropriate-filtering