Oh wow, I had a moment of panic there. Honestly though, I should have expected SOME crack. Most people can't go too long without writing some XD

In Alex's defense, Chocolate chip cookies are GOOD. Wouldn't he have gotten, like, salmonella or something from the raw eggs in the cookie dough?

Love it! Could have cried laughing! ; )

Aww, that's so cute. Lol, No wonder Fox made it to SO.

That was really funny. I didn't think he was captured by bad guys but I couldn't figure out what exactly was going on. The cookie dough was definitely not expected, neither was the spoon instead of a gun. A really great one-shot. I'm curious as to who the person in the bedroom was though...

Roflmao

With a single graceful gesture, the teenager latched his fingers around a locked doorknob and swung through the fall. His feet touched lightly against a carpeted surface, and as they regained friction, his bare toes latched on to the fabric. He spun into a casual roll and wound up back on both feet like a spry cat. "Really, it was just—"

This was so funny! I laughed at the end even though I was so scared for Alex at fist.

OMFG! I was not expecting that! LOL! LOVE IT! This deserves a PQP review!
Praise: What can I say, that was I was thinking scorpia, then I was thinking a AU involving ASH, AND THEN I was thinking 'MWAHAHAHAaaaa COOKIE DOUGH!
Question:How did you come up with this? PURE GOLD
Polish: nothing could be improved in this story.

This one is so awesome. The first half you just think he's about to die, when all he's done is stolen cookie dough. Although, considering the offense...
Normally I don't like songfics, but this seemed to fit perfectly.
Well done.
I shall have to continue my stalking routine tomorrow. Vampires need sleep too.

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Oh my god; I thought Alex was actually in a life-theatening situation (not that this one isn't, but you get what I mean.)

"... and the cold feel of steel was pressed against his neck." You're sneaky, you know that? And here I thought you were talking about a gun.

Anyhow, we all know that stealing is immoral. However, from this story, we now learn that stealing /cookie dough/ is not only immoral, but a capital crime in itself. *tsk* *tsk* Alex, what were you thinking?

hahahaha, I was so worried. and you added a twist

yeah, this is one mission he will not get out of

I LOVE THIS FANFICTION! Seriously, it was so suspenseful and so serious in the beginning and then *BOOM!* You drop the bomb that it's Ben attacking Alex and that this whole thing is because he ate the cookie dough. *Insert hysterical laughing here* That's so funny! Hah! Poor Alex though. I mean, if I caught him stealing my cookie dough, he'd be hanging from the ceiling dead by now. I can't imagine what Ben will do to him now. Ha! Really good writing and awesome song. Keep it up.

- Booka

wow. this madde my day.

this was so funny, the most i laughed today.

i thought alex was in some serious trouble.

good story.

hahah you managed to surprise me with the ending, i was definitly worried for Alex's life ...though i guess i still should be - Ben seems to be very protective of his cookie dough XD

hope you're feeling better!

:)

This was really good, and the end made me smile, since it sounded like my brother and mom. It was worth it that you not update your other stories for this one!